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Tempus, Chapter Nineteen

May 12, 2006 22:13

Title:Tempus, Chapter Nineteen
Author: Ravenna C. Tan ravenna_c_tan
House: Ravenclaw
Word Count: 3701 (just this chapter)
Challenge: The "Old Cliches, New Tricks" Fest at hp_cliche
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Plot and more plot.
Pairing:H/D
Beta Reader Thanks To: miraba
Cliche: Time-travel, but that isn't Snarry.
Disclaimer: Harry, Draco, Hogwarts, and the rest all ( Read more... )

Comments 9

bansheeqwn May 13 2006, 03:22:07 UTC

YAY!!! *sniff* I'm all teary eyed now....so good to know that they'll be together forever and have lots of hot, hot butt sex!!! YUMM... Although I have to confess that I was a little stunned by the thought of present Draco dying; it made me sad:( But that's probably due to me reading too much post-HBP fanfic!

Just to let you know, I've been checking for new chapters every afternoon after getting home from work. As eager as I am to read the rest, I can't beleive it's almost over. You truly did an amazing job with this story!

ravenna_c_tan May 13 2006, 05:29:33 UTC

Thank you so much. It really means a lot to me that you read it every day and that it moved you.

Heh. All the other fics I have written to date have involved post-HBP Draco... and it would have just exploded my brain to put him and this Draco together in a story. I think it would have broken Harry's brain, too.

Instead, in the sequel, I think I might drag Snape into it. *still percolating* I definitely want to see where this Harry and this Draco go next.

scrtkpr May 13 2006, 03:45:59 UTC

Just one chapter left! I don't suppose you could post it a little earlier in the day...say, 1 am? ;)

OK! OK! ravenna_c_tan May 13 2006, 05:31:02 UTC

I am such a softie. It's 1:30 am and, well, all right... I will do a final proofread and get it up in a few minutes!

btw, i love your icon!

forever_silky May 13 2006, 23:43:55 UTC

absolutely wonderful, I love how you mixed canon with AU e.g. OOTF and POA.

euphory May 14 2006, 00:27:49 UTC

I love this story. I do. I love this Draco. But it's just... My beloved bratty present Draco is gone??? to be replaced with his great-grandfather? and no one will miss him??? too much. too much. too much I tell you. Give my Draco back.

ravenna_c_tan May 14 2006, 00:38:08 UTC

Oh, people will miss him -- you can be sure of that. In fact, I think even Harry will... something to deal with in a sequel!

ura_hd May 14 2006, 00:54:36 UTC

Did you have to kill the "present" Draco? Poor boy. I know you had to justify bringing the "past" Draco into the present somehow, but did you have to kill?

The rest is great. It is nice how all unclear and mysterious points and puzzles got connected and clarified.

I am glad that P.Black is dead. He totally deserved it!

Nice twist with the Room of the Requirement.

ravenna_c_tan May 14 2006, 05:21:57 UTC

Hey, I didn't kill him, some Aurors did... (I think.)

No seriously, not in a plot sense but in a 'balance of the universe' sense, canon!draco had to go in order for my Draco to come forward. (To quote out of context: "There can be only one...!") I felt somehow that had to be the final piece emotionally for Harry to lose any reservations he had about bringing Draco with him, as well--though he never really shows much doubts, they are there underneath.