Tempus, Chapter Thirteen

May 05, 2006 20:19

Title:Tempus, Chapter Thirteen
Author: Ravenna C. Tan ravenna_c_tan
House: Ravenclaw
Word Count: 5414 (just this chapter)
Challenge: The "Old Cliches, New Tricks" Fest at hp_cliche
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: More plot! More angst! (I promise to get back to more sex later!)
Pairing:H/D
Beta Reader Thanks To: miraba
Cliche: Time-travel, but that isn't Snarry.
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ura_hd May 6 2006, 02:41:07 UTC
Oh, no. Not Draco's pretty blue eyes.

You got me in this chapter. In your reply to my comments you made me believe that Harry would lose the Quidditch match and I was so nervious and jumpy when reading about it. But Harry caught the Snitch! Yeah! I did not get it why he fell down afterwards. Did he accicently jump from his broom?

It is weird and somewhat unrealistic that two Dracos look so similar that Harry has a trouble to distinguish them.

Who exploded the glass? I guess the answer is coming.

Great chapter! But I cannot wait for a new one!

By the way, you should cross-post your story at different outlets. It is a great, high-quality fic and I am sure many people would enjoy it.

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ravenna_c_tan May 6 2006, 03:50:05 UTC
I'd love some suggestions where to cross post. I did put some links earlier at malfoy_slash and bottomdraco. Is there an H/D newsletter like the HPSS Prophet? I'm still learning my way around LJ.

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ravenna_c_tan May 7 2006, 03:21:34 UTC
Thanks! I knew about harrydraco but not hd_falling. I have used one fanfic archive site thus far: The Archive at The End of the Universe but I'll look at the others, too!

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mischiefcat May 9 2006, 02:35:46 UTC
This story is amazing, I can't wait for more.

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ravenna_c_tan May 9 2006, 03:13:16 UTC
Best of all, I'm going to be posting a new chapter every day until it is done!

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mischiefcat May 9 2006, 04:05:21 UTC
Awesome! You've just made my night. :)

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ravenna_c_tan May 9 2006, 05:31:24 UTC
In fact, given that it's now 1:30 in the morning, I'm going to count that as "Tuesday" and post right now...!

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