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Hiding // Unprepared

Aug 31, 2006 11:51

Challenge #2
title: hiding
username: buyo105
rating: g
warnings: none, really
w/c: 561
notes: from Chamber of Secrets, chapter 4/pg 49. be aware that I'm really bad with dialogue.
char/pair: Harry, Draco, Lucius and a guest appearance by Mr. Borgin. Can be read as H/D if that boils your water.
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anonymous August 31 2006, 18:05:10 UTC

gah, damn demon hand. i apologise for the amount of mistakes, i ran out of time at the library before i could read it over. i almost didnt get them posted. its supposed to be weather not water.

confiteor_3 September 1 2006, 19:47:05 UTC

You could always log in and edit it with the little pencil button.

*giglesnot* That first one was funny. Closet jokes, no matter how cliche and pathetic they are, always makes me laugh. Great job!
The second one's so pensive. Lovely.

anonymous September 2 2006, 01:10:20 UTC

editing will have to wait til i get to a puter. i think Hiding would have been a smidge better if i had been able to add the rest. it consisted of draco chasing after harry and standing uncomfortably close. perhaps at a later date. thank you for reading and taking the time to comment :)

sithhappens_101 August 31 2006, 23:10:19 UTC

I really like the last one. Thanks so much for entering!

sithhappens_101 August 31 2006, 23:18:35 UTC

thankers :) the first was supposed to be longer but i had to cut it short *shakes fist at the library* thank you for reading!

alliana07 September 2 2006, 03:30:07 UTC

Beautiful entries! I loved them both! Thanks for entering!