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[nimrod_9]

 
Title: Apprehension and Avoidance
Pairing: Remus/Severus
Rating: NC-17
Challenge: Holy Foreskin Fest
Word Count: 2,537
Warnings: Unbeta’d (sorry didn’t have time), implied m-preg, an infant (horrors), not nearly enough sex
Author’s note: I’m not Jewish so if I’ve screwed up anything… I apologize

Severus clutched their son to his chest as he fed him

Comments

[rickey_a]

I can honestly say that I never thought I'd read a domestic Snupin, but this was sweet and funny. I liked Draco's cameo a lot.

[nimrod_9]

Thanks!! I like Draco as the voice of reason occasionally. Thanks again for commenting!!

[persevero]

Golly, I can't imagine how Remus would take being there when it's done - it is definitely very guilt-inducing. My younger one got his revenge by reaching up and grabbing his sandek's* tie and pulling like crazy.

* - that is the person who is 'honoured' by holding the baby.

[nimrod_9]

I think I'm about to find out how Remus takes it....I have a bunny that is demanding to be uncaged to finish this!! Thanks for the info on 'sandek'!! My sons were all 'done' in the hospital...I didn't watch just held after wards. Thanks for commenting!!

[nimrod_9]

*snatches kiss* Thanks!! Your comment was very eloquent and persuasive! If the sequel pops out I'll be sure to warn you !! *grins*

[athenakt]

I liked how you made Snape grow quiet and more abrupt after Lupin voiced his opinion; it showed how important the relationship and child was to him. Lupin really stuck both feet in his mouth when he phrased things that way, unintentionally comparing Snape's having been "mutilated" as well. I was also pleased that everything wasn't completely hearts and flowers at the end of the fic.

[nimrod_9]

Thanks!! I think this was a bit more true to life. There is a sequel in the works...but not until after I finish my hp valensmut piece. Thanks for the thoughtful comment!!

[littleisle]

I really enjoyed this! Domestic Snupin is one of my fave, and I loved the way you outlined their apprehension as parents.