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xxjail_birdxx in hp_mpreg

A New Fic

Jul 19, 2011 23:05

I hope people are still reading this, and I'd really like some input on this fic. I've written a few here before and recently had the urge to write another. I haven't totally decided where I am going with this yet, so I only have the first chapter done. I hope you all will read and post your opinions! Thanks!!

P.S. I know this first chapter is uber ( Read more... )

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cyn_ful July 20 2011, 05:28:35 UTC

The premise is interesting so far. He is obviously about to have a baby or a miscarriage. There are the obvious questions of how he got pregnant/why.

I was actually thankful to see this was short because I was going to respond with - you need a bit more in your summary if you want to catch our eyes.

Summary - Harry suddenly loses his baby during a quidditch match. Can his relationship with Draco survive the tests that they are about to endure?

For me, there are so many stories out there, seeing that I may or may not write more makes me want to skip it. The only thing that pulled me in is that this could possibly become a creature fic. I <3 creature fics ( ... )

xxjail_birdxx July 20 2011, 05:37:00 UTC

Thanks!

I will definitely have more of a summary once I've gotten my head around where it's going exactly. I have an idea, but trying to work out some details before I put it all into a summary. So it's not that I don't have a goal in mind, just working out the path to get to the goal.

Also, I wasn't really questioning if I'd write more of it. I already am and plan to continue. I was just seeking out some opinion on how the beginning sounded.

The chapters will end up being longer. This one was just the beginning of my idea. I wrote it and posted it to get it out there and am working on chapter two now.

cyn_ful July 20 2011, 06:00:35 UTC

Awesome! You have a great start. I really, really hope I didn't sound as bad as I think I may have. I saw the question and decided I would give you my honest answer ( ... )

mosquito1013 July 21 2011, 06:44:34 UTC

Just wanting to say, I'm enjoying this! There are way too many WIP fics out there, and I want to read something that it actually ends. :D

kitty_fic July 21 2011, 09:30:52 UTC

you should try crossposting to harrydracompreg