And the Bible Didn't Mention Us (Not Even Once) - A gift for gamma_x_orionis!

[scarletladyy]

Title: And the Bible Didn't Mention Us (Not Even Once)
Author: flyingharmony
Recipient: gamma_x_orionis
Pairing(s): Bellatrix/Narcissa, Lucius/Narcissa
Word Count: 3842
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Angst, Illness, Character Death
Summary: It feels different to lose your mind.
Author's Notes: First of all, a massive thank you to the mods for hosting this wonderful fest and for

Comments

[gamma_x_orionis]

Oh my God. I was POSITIVE that I commented on this back when the fest was posting. *Bangs head on desk* I remember reading it and being all excited because I was sure you had written it! I feel terrible D: Will you ever forgive me?

As should be apparent, I thought that this was an absolutely amazing fic ♥ The descriptions of Narcissa's illness were heartbreaking, especially the sense she had that she would never improve, which is a terribly realistic feeling. And when Lucius showed up - well, I do love a plot twist! I adored all the dialogue and argument between him and Bellatrix, and how they're both equally passionate that Narcissa is theirs and that the other shouldn't have her. And then the end... you broke my heart, bb :'(

"You're not going mad," Bellatrix whispered as she sat down on the bed, pulling her into a firm but gentle embrace. "It feels different to lose your mind, Cissy. You're not going mad."I loved this! Of course Bellatrix would know more about losing one's mind than anyone else

[flyingharmony]

*stares forever at the massively long and perfect comment of perfection before squealing and tackleglomping you* ♥ ♥ ♥

OF COURSE I FORGIVE, YOU BB! <333 I'm just so, so, so relieved that you like it, OMG! I was tracking but still nervously refreshing the page allllll the time, and oy, I was so nervous DDD: ANYWAY I'M SO HAPPY NOW! *squeals again* ♥

I totally knew that you'd know it was me in the second I chose the quote to begin with haha, and I kept telling Fairy all the time "she's so gonna know it's me before she even started reading!" This is really our fest, isn't it? ♥ It's so romantic, actually, I absolutely love it! :D

And ooohhhh, the plot twist... I'm still so proud of that! (like I'm super proud of the entire fic, tbh) And over all of Bella's and Lucius' desperate fighting they forget that a third thing is taking possession of Narcissa... Soooorry for breaking your heart, bb! ♥