Oh, how sad it is that you'll probably get less replies than you deserve, since this is femslash :(
I love this, I really do. I normally wouldn't have read this pairing but I've been trying to read every remix story so far and I'm glad. It's so real, such an everyday tragedy, yet so heartbreaking. You manage to make us pity them all. The drabble sets an interesting stage and the act played out in the fic is just what it should be.
Very nicely done, a great build up of the domestic tension there. I especially love it when writers focus on what makes the characters human rather than what makes them witches and wizards, and this does a great job on that.
I tried writing them as people who take their magic and the fact that they're witches and wizards for granted. Well, they pay attention to Harry's bursts of magic, but it's the same way that people notice their kids' Bar Mitzvah's. It's a natural part of their lives and they can't wait till the kid stops blowing things up to vent his/her feelings ;-)
Oh dear sweet Circe on a unicycle. This is unbelievable. It's so good but it's soooooo sad!! Please write the sequel where everything gets fixed. Ron and Hermione divorce and Ginny and Hermione become a couple. And all is forgiven!! Wah! Please!
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How sad. I was waiting for them - someone - to get back together.
Very well written. Gripping!
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How sad. I was waiting for them - someone - to get back together.
Yep, I'm evil >:-)
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I love this, I really do. I normally wouldn't have read this pairing but I've been trying to read every remix story so far and I'm glad. It's so real, such an everyday tragedy, yet so heartbreaking. You manage to make us pity them all. The drabble sets an interesting stage and the act played out in the fic is just what it should be.
Thank you for sharing :)
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Heh. I normally wouldn't have written this pairing. I need to try and write more femslash.
The drabble sets an interesting stage and the act played out in the fic is just what it should be.
Thank you, I had a hard time not going off in tangents that had little to do with the original drabble (and oh, how I wanted to...)
Thank you for sharing :)
Thank you for reading :)
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I tried writing them as people who take their magic and the fact that they're witches and wizards for granted. Well, they pay attention to Harry's bursts of magic, but it's the same way that people notice their kids' Bar Mitzvah's. It's a natural part of their lives and they can't wait till the kid stops blowing things up to vent his/her feelings ;-)
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Still, amazing writing. Well done.
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I want moooooore!
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