blue_moony & maeglinyedi

Aug 16, 2004 03:49

Author: blue_moony
Title: Offerings
Pairing: Draco/Voldemort
Challenge: "As he was valiant, I honor him, but as he was ambitious, I slew him" - Shakespeare, Julius Caesar, Act III Scene II.
Word Count: 200

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herlifeisbroken August 15 2004, 11:27:27 UTC
That was a truly satisfying tale - and an amazing turn from the drabble. Bravo! Bravo!

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maeglinyedi August 17 2004, 09:46:37 UTC
Thanks! I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it. :-)

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pitchblackrose August 15 2004, 15:22:38 UTC
I love how there is more to Draco than anyone guesses, this is what we're all hoping that will be the case in canon :) And I must congratulate maeglinyedi on truly disgusting descriptions, this one really got me:

He runs his hands across it, the tips of his fingers lingering over the soft nipples. It feels better than the silk beneath it, softer and more welcome.

Truly nauseating and terrifyingly vivid.

Thank you both, I'm impressed :)

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maeglinyedi August 17 2004, 09:47:32 UTC
Thanks! And personally, I didn't think the descriptions in this fic were that disgusting. If you want truly disgusting, you should read my Ron/Draco fic. ;-)

I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed it. :-)

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fluffyllama August 15 2004, 16:08:05 UTC
Wow, I can't believe I couldn't see that coming, especially as I wondered why the conversations with everyone were turning up after their deaths. I am so very thick sometimes *g*

What a fabulous take on the drabble, and the skin bit is beautifully gruesome, great job on the description.

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maeglinyedi August 17 2004, 09:48:21 UTC
Thank you! I'm so happy to hear you enjoyed it (and that you didn't see what was coming, because that's what I was going for). :-)

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snapetoy August 15 2004, 16:20:58 UTC
maeglinyedi, you sneaky, sneaky woman! I didn't see that coming at all!

An interesting drabble, blue_moony, and one that seems quite closed and complete, that the story is told. And of course, I do always enjoy seeing Draco get the bullet!

I love the idea of Harry's skin draped over Voldemort's bed - and I love even more that it isn't Harry's! What poor sucker did they kill??

Fabulous work!

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maeglinyedi August 17 2004, 09:49:11 UTC
Thanks so much! And who cares what sucker they killed...Draco got out, which was the most important thing (and I can't believe I just said that). I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed it. :-)

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gwendolen August 15 2004, 16:45:31 UTC
Sneaky and sensual all in one with a surprise ending. I knew something was up when DRaco talked to supposedly dead people but didn't expect this end. And an interesting turn-around on the drabble.

Very well done. Both of you actually. Lovely drabble and a great story from said drabble.

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maeglinyedi August 17 2004, 09:49:37 UTC
Thanks so much! Glad to hear you enjoyed it. :-)

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