ficbymarks & icarusinwax

Aug 25, 2004 00:56

Author: ficbymarks
Title: Take Me Down, Wear Me Out
Pairing: Harry/Zacharias
Rating: R
Word Count: 200
Theme: Don't think because I'm talking we're friends - Sneaker Pimps, Six Underground

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icarusinwax August 24 2004, 08:43:22 UTC
*meep* grazie mille! I'm glad you liked it; was a bit worried i'd be drop-kicked for not following up on the smut, but I really couldn't write a sex scene for the life of me. I wish i could though; i loved your drabble! Mmmm smut :D

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fluffyllama August 24 2004, 08:10:54 UTC
Holy fuck. The drabble was hot as hell, but I *loved* your take on it for the fic. I'm not a fan of minimalist storytelling as a rule, but that was beautifully done, unpretentious and I absolutely loved it. And that is a killer first line :-)

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icarusinwax August 24 2004, 08:45:35 UTC
Thank you! I'm not usually one to write so i'm really happy you liked it. It cracked me up that it's seen as minimalist rather than a general lack of knowledge on writing. :D

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fluffyllama August 24 2004, 08:50:10 UTC
Eh, you know what I mean ;-) I can't cope with the cryptic 'fish elephant artichoke' arty-farty stuff which people tend to write in short paragraphs like that, but this was GOOD.

[This enlightening comment brought to you by Llama the completely tactless... it's all subjective, blah, blah, disclaimer, disclaimer *g*]

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icarusinwax August 24 2004, 08:51:05 UTC
*cackles much* No, no i know what you mean :D Grazie!

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amanuensis1 August 26 2004, 00:14:17 UTC
Holy hell. Both of you guys--holy hell.

Simply brilliant takes, both of you. Wow. *is still staggered*

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icarusinwax August 27 2004, 11:28:44 UTC
Grazie from my side! I feel terrible that it isn't smutty though- especially after that incredibly smutty drabble *hangs head* :D I'm too obscure for my own good.

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amanuensis1 August 27 2004, 11:38:09 UTC
I know what you mean, the feeling of "Honestly! How could I not write smut, especially with that just SITTING there, waiting for me?"--but really, this was an even more brilliant take, and I'm so glad you went with it!

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icarusinwax August 27 2004, 11:39:13 UTC
*blushes* grazie mille! Once i learn to write smut I figure i'll try do a kinkier take on her drabble. :p

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yourquillandink August 27 2004, 13:54:31 UTC
in her mind mozart is latin

this wasincredibly disturbing, but i loved it. you really do have a way with war fics.

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angharadd September 18 2004, 10:01:04 UTC
Wow. Wowwowwow. I feel at a loss of words. It was so breathtaking and terrififc and terrifying and amazing (for the loss of words to better describe my shock and delight at such a wonderful piece of writing)...
Would you possibly let me translate it into Russian? I`ll make all the credits&post your contact information everywhere

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icarusinwax September 20 2004, 09:09:12 UTC
Oh my! Thank you so much for your lovely comments. I'll link marksykins to this comment, but on my part I don't mind your translating it into Russian :D

Sorry for the delay in responding!

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icarusinwax September 20 2004, 09:14:12 UTC
Marksykins says it's fine by her, so thank you very much! Could you please send me a link when you're done?

Grazie mille! <3

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