Author: ficbymarks Title: Take Me Down, Wear Me Out Pairing: Harry/Zacharias Rating: R Word Count: 200 Theme: Don't think because I'm talking we're friends - Sneaker Pimps, Six Underground
*meep* grazie mille! I'm glad you liked it; was a bit worried i'd be drop-kicked for not following up on the smut, but I really couldn't write a sex scene for the life of me. I wish i could though; i loved your drabble! Mmmm smut :D
Holy fuck. The drabble was hot as hell, but I *loved* your take on it for the fic. I'm not a fan of minimalist storytelling as a rule, but that was beautifully done, unpretentious and I absolutely loved it. And that is a killer first line :-)
Thank you! I'm not usually one to write so i'm really happy you liked it. It cracked me up that it's seen as minimalist rather than a general lack of knowledge on writing. :D
Eh, you know what I mean ;-) I can't cope with the cryptic 'fish elephant artichoke' arty-farty stuff which people tend to write in short paragraphs like that, but this was GOOD.
[This enlightening comment brought to you by Llama the completely tactless... it's all subjective, blah, blah, disclaimer, disclaimer *g*]
Grazie from my side! I feel terrible that it isn't smutty though- especially after that incredibly smutty drabble *hangs head* :D I'm too obscure for my own good.
I know what you mean, the feeling of "Honestly! How could I not write smut, especially with that just SITTING there, waiting for me?"--but really, this was an even more brilliant take, and I'm so glad you went with it!
Wow. Wowwowwow. I feel at a loss of words. It was so breathtaking and terrififc and terrifying and amazing (for the loss of words to better describe my shock and delight at such a wonderful piece of writing)... Would you possibly let me translate it into Russian? I`ll make all the credits&post your contact information everywhere
Oh my! Thank you so much for your lovely comments. I'll link marksykins to this comment, but on my part I don't mind your translating it into Russian :D
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[This enlightening comment brought to you by Llama the completely tactless... it's all subjective, blah, blah, disclaimer, disclaimer *g*]
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Simply brilliant takes, both of you. Wow. *is still staggered*
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this wasincredibly disturbing, but i loved it. you really do have a way with war fics.
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Would you possibly let me translate it into Russian? I`ll make all the credits&post your contact information everywhere
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Sorry for the delay in responding!
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Grazie mille! <3
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