jeddy83 & fluffyllama

Sep 02, 2004 23:51

Author: jeddy83
Title: Waiting
Pairing: Sirius/Remus
Theme: His tragic forces are heaven sent/In sweet things in a lovers breath/In knowing this was meant to be the last - Smashing Pumpkins, Where Boys Fear To Tread

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nassima September 2 2004, 14:44:45 UTC
*loves*

*cries*

He can only hope they all have summers to spare, once this is over.

*sniff*

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fluffyllama September 2 2004, 14:55:04 UTC
Thank you :-) I'm not usually comfortable writing in present tense, but I liked the drabble very much and wanted to expand from there.

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jeddy83 September 5 2004, 04:57:01 UTC
Oh Llama, this is absolutely exquisite. I realised when I decided to write this from Dumbledore's perspective that it might cause some consternation, but I love what you expanded it. Particularly the way you filled it out in terms of Albus's previous experiences and related it to the present, and your use of the honeysuckle as a motif throughout.

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fluffyllama September 5 2004, 05:09:00 UTC
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it. It was the unusual perspective that interested me in particular, I must say, and I just couldn't change that. Such a beautiful drabble.

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madilayn September 4 2004, 22:31:07 UTC
Llama - this was absolutely lovely. You picked up on my drabble that I could not write on - mostly through complete writers block!

I definately could not have used it like this though!! So well done of you.

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fluffyllama September 5 2004, 04:21:40 UTC
Heh, I'd been working on a long Dumbledore fic and the shorter fics were giving me trouble (this writer's black really has been going around), so this was a perfect chance to do something different for a break. Hope the block has shifted by now for you!

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