bksncleverness & arionrhod

Jul 19, 2004 22:48

Author: bksncleverness
Title: Untitled
Challenge: no challenge
Pairing: Harry/Neville

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arionrhod July 26 2004, 06:06:32 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! I did have a hard time with this pairing, for some reason - I think because I never really write Neville, I've not tried to get into his head before, so I'd not really given him a "voice". Now he has one, and it's a rather pleasant one in my head. ;)

I'm very glad you like it!!! :D

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arionrhod July 28 2004, 06:26:42 UTC
Oh, but the snarky potions master is SO worth the trouble, isn't he? ;)

"Oh, Professor Snape, you sexy bitch."

:D

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shimmery017 July 19 2004, 08:00:36 UTC
Oh, wonderful. Neville is especially well done. :-)

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arionrhod July 26 2004, 06:06:49 UTC
Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

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herlifeisbroken July 19 2004, 09:06:54 UTC
My heart leapt with joy when I saw that you were writing Woobies, my dear - I knew you'd do it right. And you did. This was gorgeous.

Great use of the ficlet, and this paragraph:

"Oh." Neville flushed, grateful that the silvery light would bleach the color from his face, if Harry turned around to look. How odd, and quite painful in a way, to be recognized not for who he was, but for who he was not. How typical, too, come to think of it. Harry Potter, The-Boy-Who-Lived. Neville Longbottom - The-Boy-Who-Was-Not.

Made me breathless.

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arionrhod July 26 2004, 06:07:48 UTC
Thank you!!! :D I'm glad I managed to pull it off. It took me a bit to find Neville, he's such a shy boy, but once he finally decided to let me write him it worked out decently well. ;) I'm very glad you enjoyed it!

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neon_yellow July 19 2004, 09:18:21 UTC
Oh, lovely. :) Beautiful writing, it flows very nicely together. Great job. ^_^

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arionrhod July 26 2004, 06:08:03 UTC
Thanks so much! :D

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I bow down in worship bksncleverness July 19 2004, 09:33:42 UTC
"You are the only one, Neville, for whom I am Harry... nothing more, nothing less, just... Harry."

*weeps*

I am absolutely floored. This was the first drabble I ever wrote and I thought it was a ridiculous little thing, but your fic was a diamond from the coal I gave you. Oh, I want to cry with joy!! I love Neville/Harry. Oh, you got it so right!! Just the way I dreamed it would be. Amazing writing.

A million thanks!!

And the last line: "and the magic they made between them was the oldest sorcery in the world."

*dies from the awesomeness*

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Re: I bow down in worship arionrhod July 26 2004, 06:09:17 UTC
I thought you did great on the drabble! It gave me a great deal to work with, especially in "finding" a Neville-muse. I've never focussed on him before, so it was great to have a foundation like yours to work from! I'm very glad you enjoyed it!!! :D

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Re: I bow down in worship bksncleverness July 26 2004, 23:17:53 UTC
You are too kind, really.

*rereads the woobies*

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