ari_o & honeycakehorse

[melpemone]

Author: ari_o
Title: In The Dark
Pairing: Percy/Snape
Theme: Dreamed of ringing voices they contemplated choices - Tricky

Comments

[herlifeisbroken]

Wow, that is incredibly dark and creepy. I really enjoyed the imagery. Well-done.

[honeycakehorse]

Thank you! *wipes forehead* I've never really written dark fic before, so I'm glad you liked it. :)

[fluffyllama]

Wow, that was very enjoyable for something so depressing *g* So dark and bleak, very well done.

[honeycakehorse]

Thank you! Glad you did enjoy it even though it was so dark. :)

[stellahobbit]

You really got into Percy's mind - wonderfully insightful, although I continue to hold out hopes that he returns to the family in Book 6.

[honeycakehorse]

Thanks for the compliment. I'm happy that you found Percy believable. And yes, I also hold hope that he will see his mistakes and return, but it just didn't want to work in this fic. ;)

[shimmery017]

I really enjoyed the idea of PErcy being destroyed by the fact that his mother hated him. His breakdown was perfect. Good fic!

[honeycakehorse]

Thank you! I wasn't sure about the transition from Percy being lucid to him being crazy, so I'm relived that you found it enjoyable.

[bksncleverness]

"One thing was certain: He wouldn't forget that lesson in humility quickly, not the one from Lucius and not the one from Snape."

Boy, did he choose the sticky end of the lollipop.

OMG, so sad! So dark!

Very well done.

[honeycakehorse]

Well, he didn't really choose but was tricked into becoming a DE and now just is too afraid to try and do something about it.

Thank you for the feedback, I'm glad you liked it. :)