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leogryffin & blue_moony

Aug 04, 2004 23:30

Author: leogryffin
Title: Control
Words: 198
Rating: PG-13, pre-slash
Pairing: Ron/Harry
Challenge: if you close the door/the night could last forever/Keep the sunshine out and say hello to never - The Velvet Underground, After Hours
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blue_moony August 10 2004, 05:37:27 UTC

Whew! I was worried about how that was going to turn out for the reader; very relieved now! Thank you for reading and responding!

gmth August 4 2004, 07:53:25 UTC

I agree with Marks. It's impressive how you communicated Harry's thoughts and insecurities. Plus I just love the idea of Harry sleeping while Ron watches over him. Wonderful job. :-)

blue_moony August 10 2004, 05:38:01 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

herlifeisbroken August 4 2004, 08:05:57 UTC

This is fantastic. You really did an amazing job working the original drabble into a beautiful story. Awesome!

blue_moony August 10 2004, 05:38:29 UTC

Thanks for a wonderful source drabble!

amanuensis1 August 4 2004, 13:54:56 UTC

Just lovely. I can feel Harry's anguish like heavy wet air breathed into the lungs. So very evocative!

blue_moony August 10 2004, 05:39:35 UTC

Wah! Thank you you for reading and replying! Really very glad you enjoyed it.

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blue_moony August 10 2004, 05:40:23 UTC

Thank you for the very kind words! Glad you enjoyed it!