mimbulus & ari_o

[melpemone]

Author: mimbulus
Title: Paralysis
Pairing: Snape/Moody
Theme: The steam of my misfortunes / Has given me the power to be afraid - Smashing Pumpkins, Porcelina of the Vast Oceans

Comments

[pitchblackrose]

I must admit that my first reaction was relief - that Snape and Moody didn't get naked and did naughty things to each other ;)

The second reaction was admiration - this fic makes such sense that it hurts. It fits perfectly with their (canon) characterization. (It also dawns on you that they're both so rigid and growling that they just have to be related - why didn't the rest of us spot it like you did?!) The drabble suddenly gets new meaning and new depth when read again after the fic - good job :)

[ari_o]

:"> I just couldn't bring myself to have them get down - and I wrote Kreacher/James for gawd's sake.

[herlifeisbroken]

Wow. That was so very painful and brilliantly done. I really could put myself inside the scene, the writing was so evocative.

Well-done.

[ari_o]

Thanks. :D

[tarotgoddess108]

OMG!
That was GOOOOOOOd!

[ari_o]

I am so relieved I felt weird about this piece.

[shimmery017]

Oh, great weaving in! And specially good group scene- loved the different voices all jumping in.

[ari_o]

Your icon terrifies me. :D

[arakne]

Your Moody terrifies me. :D