randiriel & prettypuddle

Aug 09, 2004 00:44

Title: Untitled
Author: randiriel
Pairing: Harry/Draco
Rated: PG
Word Count: 205
Challenge: "Such civil war is in my love and hate" - Shakespeare, Sonnet XXXV

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tarotgoddess108 August 8 2004, 11:57:12 UTC
Ooooo! This deserves a sequel or ten.

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prettypuddle August 12 2004, 12:35:23 UTC
*g* I'm not much of a H/D fan... I couldn't bring myself to write any resolution to the conflict between the two :)

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tarotgoddess108 August 12 2004, 13:02:45 UTC
yeah, that's the tricky part. And at that point - when they start acting nice to each other - it is no longer canon in my view. :-) But I still love it!

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prettypuddle August 12 2004, 12:43:26 UTC
The only bad thing? The fact that Harry didn't give in.

Well, you know my feelings for this pairing. I just couldn't do it!

I'm glad you mentioned the line you did because that was one of the few I was pleased with :)

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stellahobbit August 9 2004, 04:25:42 UTC
Not usually a Harry/Draco shipper, but you've set the scene so beautifully I can totally believe it. Well done!

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prettypuddle August 12 2004, 12:44:42 UTC
Thank you :) I'm not keen on the pairing either, so your comment meant a lot to me. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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fluffyllama August 10 2004, 05:34:10 UTC
You already know the things I like about it, I think, but it doesn't hurt to mention some of them again :-) I love the moment Harry realises Draco really is there, and that he is in this familiar scene of Muggle London, they both seem so out of place there now. I love the bitching between them, obviously ;-) Most of all I love the idea that Draco can't let go of the moment Harry acted on impulse and is still hounding him even though (with the mention of the lake and all) they were still at school then. Persistent little sod!

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prettypuddle August 12 2004, 13:08:40 UTC
I love the bitching between them, obviously ;-)

I had fun with the bitching! I'm glad you liked it too :)

Thanks for you comment. And for the beta *hugs* You're a star!

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