Comments | hp_spotlighting: Bellatrix/Sirius, PG-13

lazaray in hp_spotlighting

Bellatrix/Sirius, PG-13

May 26, 2006 11:47

Title: Disappear
Pairing: Sirius/Bellatrix
Author: lazaray
Rating: PG-13? I am terrible at rating things.
Word Count: Right at 500.
Warnings: Some blood, if that even counts. A little angsty.

This is the first thing I've posted here and honestly, the first thing I've written in about two weeks. Thanks for the invite :)

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Comments 3

expositionary June 8 2006, 04:56:26 UTC

Oh, wow.

I don't even like reading Sirius/Bellatrix, but this was a gorgeous, gorgeous piece. I may or may not have said it before, but you have such a way with words...

I love this line especially: her name changed but nothing else.

The ending is really what got me: jolt back into bleak reality.

lazaray June 8 2006, 15:58:08 UTC

Wow, thank you so much! I appreciate that coming from you, because you yourself have an amazing way with words :)

kethlenda June 9 2006, 15:19:46 UTC

I'm late getting around to reading this, but this is really good! I love the tension between the two characters, and your use of language.