Commitment Issues for the community [R] -- NL/HP, HP/DM, NL/DM (2)

[hptriangles]

Title: Commitment Issues
Author: larasaku
Recipient: community
Rating: T, maybe light R
Ship: Neville/Harry; Harry/Draco; Neville/Draco
Warnings: slash
Summary: 1) Two people in one of the listed threesomes are a couple, but one of them can't help lusting over the third person. Angsty, happy ending optional.
Genre: Romance, Humor and attempts at

Comments

[fire_breather]

NL/HP is a pairing that I enjoy very much but the twist at the end leaves me feeling as if the story is not finished, like it was cut short.

but up to that point it had the makings of a very good story. sorry I'm not very good with critiques.