Comments | hp_wintersmut: Fic: "Hippogriff Feathers" (Sirius/Harry) for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/siriuslysnogged">siriuslysnogged</a></strong>

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Fic: "Hippogriff Feathers" (Sirius/Harry) for siriuslysnogged

Jan 10, 2008 19:05

Author:
Recipient: siriuslysnogged
Title: Hippogriff Feathers
Rating: Adult/Mature
Pairing: Sirius/Harry
Warnings: Chan, non-con, angst, dark.
Word count: Approx 2,400
Beta Reader: Beta'd by R, thanks again :)
Request: Remember when Sirius got all friggin moody when Harry was leaving to go back to Hogwarts? Sirius kind of just sulked and avoided everyone. I'd ( Read more... )

fic, harry/sirius, harry potter, sirius black, fest 2007

Comments 12

megyal January 10 2008, 20:58:39 UTC

There was so much pain, not just in his arse but in his lower back and the base of his tummy as well as Harry struggled beneath the weight of his godfather.

I don't know why that line resonated with me so much, just the physical pinpointing of the agony he was going through. Very dark and intense. This was my face when I finished reading: =[, so that means you did good.

eriador117 January 21 2008, 09:00:56 UTC

Thank you. I had to write if from Harry's POV, but half the time I just wanted to climb into the story and rescue him!

take care,
Annette

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Re: !!!! eriador117 January 21 2008, 09:01:25 UTC

Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it.

take care,
Annette

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eriador117 January 21 2008, 09:01:52 UTC

Thanks, a bit disturbing to write. Poor Harry!

take care,
Annette

hpstrangelove January 11 2008, 04:13:11 UTC

You did a really good job with this. SB/HP are not really a pairing I read much, and this one was very sad in a way. I always see Harry wanting Sirius to be a 'father' replacement, looking up to him for love and guidance. The betrayal Harry felt at what Sirius does, and the feelings Harry has as it's happening, were very well written. It didn't really seem like Sirius knew that Harry didn't want him that way.

I don't think I could write something as emotionally hurtful as this one was. It's like sake1_1 said - amazing.

eriador117 January 21 2008, 09:03:43 UTC

It's not my usual pairing either, as you know, LOL! I wanted to show the double betrayal, because Harry I think does look up to Sirius as a father figure and that despite lots of news reports etc., most abuse/rape happens by someone you know, not strangers. It was very emotional to write, poor Harry.

take care,
Annette

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eriador117 January 21 2008, 09:05:10 UTC

Thank you.

take care,
Annette