Bones fanfiction - The Bet, Ch 2

Aug 13, 2009 07:50

It was the only kind of bet he made anymore. And the stakes were impossibly high. Rated M for later chapters. Romance/Angst/Humor. Definitely BB, some Hodgela, and Zach!
Chapter 1 can be found at hpaich.livejournal.com/14992.html
The first fifteen chapters are listed at fanfiction.net, if you want to read more quickly. I hope you enjoy!

The Bet, Ch 2 )

brennan, boreanaz, fanfiction, bones, fanfic, temperance, deschanel, booth

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bearlee_there August 13 2009, 16:32:42 UTC
You're writing a fic called The Bet?

*smirks*

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hpaich August 13 2009, 16:46:28 UTC
*mortified blush*

*despair*

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bearlee_there August 13 2009, 16:50:27 UTC
How's shame working for ya? ;) Don't feel too bad, I still owe gryph feedback for her last chap of Flight. She probably thinks I don't love her anymore. But I do, I do, I really do. And you, too, slacker.

Have you seen this? Warning: NSFW

http://community.livejournal.com/kinkinthebones/

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hpaich August 13 2009, 17:07:05 UTC
Up to this point it hasn't been working, nor has anything else, for shit's sake. But I did write a little yesterday and today, so maybe, PLEASE GOD, I'm turning a corner.

I'm very grateful that you don't hate me for my lack of....writing, I guess. Been very upset about this lack, lately. But I shall persevere.

Yeah, I did. And yeah, I joined. You? Not sure if I will post there. Not posting ANYTHING until Bet is going again.

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bearlee_there August 13 2009, 16:57:08 UTC
Btw, I LOVE this chapter.

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hpaich August 13 2009, 17:09:18 UTC
Thank you! Ah, the old days, when the chapters were coming fast and furious, and blockage was only something I heard people mention now and then.

Hit me. No, really, hit me.

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bearlee_there August 13 2009, 17:14:34 UTC
It happens. Don't beat yourself up too much. (That's my job.) Glad you did some writing. Sometimes that's all it takes for me is to put one word after the other even if they're crap. It's reeeeeeaaaaalllllly hard work. *whines*

Did I join? Of course, I joined. Wouldn't be surprised if my first Bones fic ever is for this community. LOL

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hpaich August 14 2009, 03:40:37 UTC
Ooh, go baby, go! We have been DYING to get some Bones-fic out of you!

Pleeeeeeeeease?

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labsquint August 13 2009, 20:51:07 UTC
Poor Booth! Dragged out for a night of dancing that he didn't ask for and now he's got to a) fend off an intrigued squint who wants to know his physical preferences in a woman (when he really only wants the whole of his partner, b) watch said partner dancing up a storm, c) watch said partner try to drink more than she should and d) deal with said partner as she's plastered against him and her hands are roaming more than they should!

Take these two out of their regular environment and Brennan at the very least lets it all hang out. Booth on the other hand seems to be a mass of nerves and second thoughts.

And he's on his own at the end with his half-drunk and exhausted partner. The man is simply in big trouble. HA!

Very nice situation you've put Booth into. Can't wait to see how he gets out of it...

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hpaich August 14 2009, 04:24:01 UTC
Hmmm...things in the mirror are closer than they appear. And things are going to swing wildly about.

I always wind up second-guessing my fics, and this one is no exception. But thank you for reading and commenting, I really appreciate it!

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jrzbonesaddict August 14 2009, 01:35:22 UTC
I like where this story is going.... ;)

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hpaich August 14 2009, 04:02:41 UTC
Thanks! So glad you're enjoying it. Stay tuned for more...

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