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Bones fanfiction - The Bet, Ch 3

Aug 24, 2009 20:10

It was the only kind of bet he made anymore. And the stakes were impossibly high. Rated M for later chapters. Romance/Angst/Humor. Definitely BB, some Hodgela, and Zach!
Chapter 1: hpaich.livejournal.com/14992.html
Chapter 2: hpaich.livejournal.com/17749.html
The first fifteen chapters are listed at fanfiction.net, if you want to read more quickly. I ( Read more... )

brennan, boreanaz, fanfiction, bones, fanfic, temperance, deschanel, seeley, booth

Comments 4

gina227 August 25 2009, 17:34:35 UTC

I've already read this over at FF.net and I love it. I love it so much I want to marry it.
*ahem*
But what I want to know is when is chapter 16 coming? :-D

hpaich August 25 2009, 17:37:57 UTC

Ha! You are funny. You want to marry it, huh? That's too much!

I promise I am working on Ch 16 - I got SUPER SUPER blocked on this, just COULDN'T get it going. But I am writing again, so hopefully I will be able to post this soon.

Thanks for reading and commenting, I really appreciate that you took the time to do so.

labsquint August 27 2009, 23:28:05 UTC

Well, I didn't read it as FF.net so I'm just waiting on Ch. 4! ;)

Great roller coaster chapter, from hot to cold, to hurt, to overspilling lust, you carried the characters (and the characterizations) through beautifully. It was all very sharp and real, which draws the reader into the story.

Zack's nightmare about Booth-on-a-rampage was funny. If anyone would be scared of that, it would be Zack!!

And you leave us, and B&B, teetering on the edge of something spectacular. I loved Booth's snapped reaction to Brennan's proclamation that he doesn't find her attractive. That was apparently just one push too far for poor Booth. But he's certainly left them both with something to think about.

Us too. So when is Ch. 4 again??

hpaich August 28 2009, 05:27:43 UTC

Heh. This was what I jokingly referred to as 'The chapter where neither of these idiots knows what the hell they want'. (It seemed both appropriate and wildly amusing at the time) It swung wildly back and forth at first - but not too much, I don't think. Sometimes I feel like they are just so clueless. How can they look at each other the way they always do and NOT know?

Thanks so much for your thoughtful input - lovely and a pleasure to read, as always! You give good review...