Fic: Long - Familiar Rhythm, Hermione/Luna, R

[retired_ego]

Title: Familiar Rhythm
Author: Magdalen
Pairing(s): Hermione/Luna; implied Hermione/Harry, Ron/Luna.
Warning: Character Death(s?), Post-Hogwarts and the war.
Rating: R, for the death, I suppose.
Notes: For Rowaine. I apologise for the lengthy lateness and hope the fic itself will make up for it. Thanks to rubykate for the beta and copious amounts of

Comments

[qurinas]

That was one of the most powerful fics I've ever read. I love that cat and mouse aspect of Hermione's and Luna's relationship. You really put a lot of depth in this and it drew me in so easily, I didn't want it to end.

You did a great job of weighing me down with the dark aspect of the fic, the tragedy caused by poor choices and omitted truths was painful to read. You did a great job with this.

Fav line: "No, Ron, I know I did it. I ran and she followed. We were good at that."

This was just awesome. I'm sorry it took me so long to get a chacne to read it and comment. You did a wonderful, astoundingly good job and thanks so much for posting!

[retired_ego]

Your review is absolutely lovely. It's feedback like this that really keeps anyone who writes going.

I'm thinking about the cat and mouse aspect. I guess I didn't before... I just wrote. Luna chases Hermione, yes, but Hermione seems to know that Luna will chase her and, in fact, encourages it but pretends she doesn't. That is, perhaps, where a lot of her guilt comes from in the end.

Made me think about my own fic. Thank you, thank you, and you're so entirely welcome.

[rubykate]

You already know how much I love this! :D And I've reccd you on my journal.

[retired_ego]

You are continuously wonderful. Thank you a thousand times. Some of your comments had me giggling with disbelief.

[rubykate]

No problem! <333

[nest_freemark]

Umm... wow. This is what happenes when I have a life. I miss omgbrilliant fic. At least I read it now. And it was.. wow. very much wow. *nods*

[retired_ego]

Three wows and an omgbrilliant make up for missing it in the first place, haha. Thanks!

[morte351]

I just found this and I can not adequately describe how wonderful and cathartic and needed it was.

Thank you for sharing.

[retired_ego]

That will do just fine. It pleases me so much to know that someone needed this. Thank you.

[retired_ego]

That will do just fine. It pleases me so much to know that someone needed this. Thank you.

[silveredsins]

-tear in eye-

Wow. That was brillant. I...-is at loss for words-

Excellent fic.

[retired_ego]

Aw, thank you. It is the kind of fic that allows a little bit of sadness. *snuggle*