"Animal House" Bellatrix/Hermione.

[maelwaedd]

Animal House
Bellatrix/Hermione
R (sorry)
Written for tesria.
Warnings for: possible humiliation, animal menagerie (soft), animal training (soft), watersports, classism.

Comments

[lilith_morgana]

*loves dystopic-future-fics to bits*

This is very good and oh, Hermione and Bellatrix and humiliation. <3!

[maelwaedd]

*glee*
Thank you so much! I'm a big fan of the dystopic business myself, to be honest. And, well, this was the only idea I could come up with where they didn't go off and have non-con, so yay!

I think I fucked up, though. Everybody else seems to be writing fics, and I wrote 100 words. *dies*

[lilith_morgana]

Bah, it was a drabble-challenge so I wrote a sort-of-drabble as well. And I'm impressed you didn't have to resort to non-con with this pairing since it's ever so difficult to give reasons for why anyone would like to be humiliated by a Death Eater. (Even if she's as hot as Bellatrix. :))

[maelwaedd]

*laughs* Well, no. It's terribly difficult. I won't write non-con generally, you see... I have, but it's always been for a good reason, and I flat out refuse to write it for challenges. So when I saw this I *died*. Then I came up with this idea at the last second.

[girlchild]

Seeing Hermione so utterly broken was a fic first for me. It was fascinating to read. The first two sentences were my favorite-- simple, short, to the point.

[maelwaedd]

Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun with it. :)

[tesria]

I like this a lot! The Hermione you wrote is a very different one to the ones I usually read, and different again from how I write her. I loved it! And I liked that it was a drabble. I worked really well with this idea, and just gave us a snippet. I think with subject matter like this there's a danger of getting gratuitious if you make it into a long fic. The drabble just shows us this rather shocking scene, and then takes it away, with I think heightens the impact.

[maelwaedd]

Whee! Thank you so much! I was terribly worried that you might be squicked by the subject matter, you see, and I do generally try to write nicer things for people I don't know particularly well. So yes... I'm very chuffed now that you like it. Thank you!

[tesria]

I'm hard to squick to be honest, especially when a piece is written well and is not *designed* to try and gross me out. This is well written and I do like it. I was really looking forward to seeing what you would come up with, and I wasn't disappointed! Thank you for writing it!

[maelwaedd]

Oh, no problem at all. Thanks for the interesting challenge. I never would have considered Bellatrix/Hermione otherwise.

[lyclady]

Goooooooood....

Although, I'm slightly upset...

deb

[maelwaedd]

Oh dear.
Why are you upset?
*worries*

[misconstrue]

wow. This is crazy, bitter and HOT.

[maelwaedd]

Thank you so much! *glomps*