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[fuschia]

Title: Rooms and Voices
Author: fuschia
Written for: shagsthedustmop
Pairing: Hermione/Luna, working at the ministry
Length: approximately 1900 words
Rating: R. (My apologies - I couldn't quite make the NC-17!)
Warnings: Angst
Briefest of Summaries: Hermione seeks out Luna in the Department of Mysteries.

Comments

[corvidae9]

YAY!!! I love! :D Both are so very IC; I especially adore the imagery you used; Luna "drifting against" Hermione; the whole castaway visual - guh; gut-wrenching, for me, at least. :D Thanks!

[fuschia]

Thank you so much for the kind feedback!!

[crumblingwalls]

Oh. Oh.

That was gorgeous. The imagery, Luna's matter of factness and how despite everything and how much they've changed, both Hermione and Luna are the same people that they once were. The description of Luna in battle was amazing, and the last line was beautiful.

This is, I think, one of the best HP femmeslash pieces that I've had the pleasure of reading. Thank you.

[fuschia]

Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear that Luna's matter-of-factness comes across -- that's one of her qualities that I like so much in the books.

Thank you for reading and giving such kind feedback!

Fuschia

[lindentree]

Oh, wow. That was brilliant. I'm... I'm totally at a loss for words to describe it. Excellent, awesome job. I love it.

[fuschia]

Thank you so much for reading and giving me such kind feedback!

Yours,

Fuschia

[lindentree]

No problem! Also, icon love. :)

[girlchild]

Wow.

Your characterizations of both Hermione and Luna were so excellent, I can't even *begin* to tell you. I liked your explorations of the rooms in the Ministry, most particularly the Death Room and what it meant to each girl.

There were just so many wonderful things about this! Lovely, lovely job.

[fuschia]

Thank you so much for your kind feedback! Sorry for the belated response -- I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and for commenting!

Fuschia

[shagsthedustmop]

Wow! That was simply wonderful! Thank you so much for putting so much into the challenge :) No apologies necessary about the NC-17; this was just perfect as it is! The characterizations were spot on, and the emotions were almost palpable!

*squees!*

[fuschia]

Thank you so much for the kind feedback -- I'm so thrilled that you liked the story. Sorry for my belated reply, and thanks for the feedback!

Yours,

Fuschia