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[thoughtcr1me]

Late. *smites self* Profound apologies. I had sort of a LJ-breakdown, took so much time away from flists and things that I completely forgot when this was due. *smites self again*

Without further ado.

Bella/Narcissa
Title: Consequences
Rating: R
Written for: soawen
Word count: 1345
Warnings: none (okay, none but the obvious incest; it's Bella/

Comments

[starlighttears]

Um...longest drabble ever.

[thoughtcr1me]

Yeah, it sort of took over on me. But then I looked and it said "at least 100 words," so I figured I'd leave off carving it up. :)

[soawen]

She knows she'll pay for this later, knows as she does every time she summons Narcissa, that the Dementors would swarm down like locusts, greedy, never-satisfied.

That was so much more than I dared hoped for! Thank you ever so much :D

Taking the consequences!Bella is wonderfully uncompromising, and subterfuge!Narcissa is to die for. I like the way you use the children here, both as a plot device and as a way to describe the differencies between the sisters.

And oh, that well-known and familiar hip that has lost far too much flesh over the past years. the timespan! <3

[thoughtcr1me]

hee! (finally made it back to check stuff, email comments don't seem to be working lately) Glad you liked it. ;)

[epistretes]

I really enjoyed this.

Both characters were intruiging and kept me interested.

[thoughtcr1me]

Thanks a lot--never written a long femmeslash before, so I was nervous. :)

[girlchild]

I've never seen fic set in Azkaban, and I think you managed it quite well. I liked your descriptions of both ladies very much. ^^

[thoughtcr1me]

Thanks! :D

*walks away grinning*

[demoka]

oooh.... intense