Walking in His Shoes, Chapter 11

Oct 28, 2004 00:38

All right, folks. Here it is...Severus' selfless act of love! I hope you enjoy it. *passes the torch on to Corgi*

Thanks to Nymphy for the quick beta job.

Walking in His Shoes - Chapter Eleven )

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aliciamasters October 28 2004, 06:04:32 UTC
Is it just me, or are we getting better chapters after the one week rule? This is one amazing group, that reacts well under pressure! Maggie, I loved this. Severus as self-sacrificing may seem slightly OOC, but I loved that he had to rationalize it to himself first. I also loved the conversation with Nagini -- it bodes well for the rest of the story!

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magdelena1969 October 28 2004, 06:49:43 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! And yes, I agree, I think we all work well under pressure. *snicker*

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sev1970 October 28 2004, 07:07:49 UTC
Hehe...good chapter, I liked Nagini's new formed allegiance to Harry! Ahhhhh....Severus loves Harry and acted selflessly to help him! Now to see Harry's act...Wonderful job as always!

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magdelena1969 October 28 2004, 07:36:16 UTC
Glad you liked it. It was a fun chapter to write. I can't wait to see where Corgi takes us from here.

:) Maggie

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deirdre_riordan October 28 2004, 09:17:39 UTC
Ooh, how cool! I loved the thing with Nagini-- I've always wondered if something like that might happen in canon. Figures that Severus would express his love in such a roundabout way. ;) Nice joy!

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deirdre_riordan October 28 2004, 09:18:45 UTC
joy?!
Nice job, I meant!
*headdesk*

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magdelena1969 October 28 2004, 15:50:33 UTC
Err...make room on the desk for my head too, I didn't even see the word "joy". *sigh* *rubs eyes and reads your comment again* OH, um, yeah! *snort* I really need to sleep more.

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magdelena1969 October 28 2004, 15:48:36 UTC
Glad you liked it. I couldn't resist using Nagini. I was going to have Severus sneak all the way in, but then I thought, hmm, if he can do that, why wouldn't the Order have tried to get in... Eh, so Nagini was convenient. And I got to kill the Auror from hell! Bonus! Sorry, rambling. *blushes* Thanks!

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Wonderful job _ataraxis_ October 28 2004, 12:57:13 UTC
Honestly, Maggie. That's just great, you really were productive yesterday. I'm astounded by your ability.

I'll agree with the others, liked the use of Nagini in this chapter.

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Re: Wonderful job magdelena1969 October 28 2004, 15:51:22 UTC
What can I say? I enjoy working under pressure. *snicker* Give me a deadline and I'll get it done! Thanks.

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stryfechild October 28 2004, 15:53:35 UTC
*claps* lovely job, just lovely i love the Nagini bit, old Voldie's not going to be to happy if he learns he's lost his snake's alligiance....

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magdelena1969 October 28 2004, 15:56:40 UTC
Hee hee. I'm rather fond of Nagini for some reason, and I can't wait to see his reaction either. *peers meaningly at Corgi*

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goldpemcorgi October 28 2004, 16:47:36 UTC
Heheheheeh I've got just the thing!!!

*Corgi trots wagging her little stump of a tail and heads to the keyboard to force that last bit of the current chapter of The Curse off.*

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magdelena1969 October 28 2004, 17:09:42 UTC
*snort* Have fun!!!

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