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deep_emerald in hproundrobin

In My Power - Chapter One

Nov 20, 2004 12:34

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Amazing! amandasaitou November 22 2004, 19:27:02 UTC

Deep, this is really good! I loved the way you switched between the "real world" lines and Severus' allucinations, concerning to a very hot fantasy! And yeah, Lucius free after the incidents on OOTP is hard to believe, but as you said, it's a good line of the story to work on!
Hope I can have my turn somewhere in the story!
Hugs! :)

Re: Amazing! deep_emerald November 22 2004, 19:35:26 UTC

*blushes* Thank you so much! I know people are having a hard time with Lucius, but I'm hoping it will provide some good tension later on. If his precarious freedom is at risk, he could be a formidable bad guy for Harry and Snape to deal with. Oh, please do sign up! I'd love to read your contribution to the story!

Hugs!
Emma