Moments pt 26

[hspirito]

It was three days later and Don hadn’t been able to sleep for more than 20 minutes at a time ever since Grace had found the blood at the entry way of the cabin that turned out to be Meryl’s. The one time he got close to sleep the night before he almost immediately woke up in a cold sweat, his mind torturing him with where Meryl was and if she was

Comments

[kimmm_berly]

omg this is so sad, jack is really a horrible person i cant believe what he is doing to meryl, I hope she gets out of this hell soon and that she and don can reconnect :S

[sg4ever]

OMG he's rape her??????
Noooooo it's so horible but I know Don, Roy and Masson will find she. Finally I hope.
This story is sooooooo amazing, you are incredible.
I know you update just now but I can't wait for the next update.
Thank for this story.

[miley25]

Its so good! jack is a horrible person. He raped Meryl? Poor girl update soon:)

[evilangels26]

I have to say I really like how you're giving us such a detailed picture of how Jack is as a person. Character building is so often lacking in most stories, it sot of justifies whatever he is doing! You really have a talent. I love the story line and the line "She now belonged to him and he was going to ruin her so that even if she did get out she would never be the same woman she once was." broke my heart!
Update soon!

[miley25]

Just an idea. I noticed the kids weren't mentioned in the story much. Could you maybe have Meryl free herself in the next chapter and the kids thoughts and feelings towards jack as well?? Its just a thought :)