Comments | hspirito: Eyes Wide Open pt 2

hspirito

Eyes Wide Open pt 2

Mar 03, 2013 19:29

Meryl was asleep in the car ride home from Maine to New York.

Initially she was in a peaceful sleep but it quickly turned into a nightmare only it wasn’t a nightmare it was much, much worse it was a memory…

She was still in her cell, trapped as Jack’s prisoner. The world around her blurred in and out of focus, her body was on fire with pain and ( Read more... )

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miley25 March 4 2013, 08:05:38 UTC

Really good update soon!! Maybe have the children involved in the next chapter:)

nieve4u March 4 2013, 10:41:55 UTC

I agree with miley! What about her regaining her memories? Nonetheless good chp! :D

kimmm_berly March 4 2013, 19:10:13 UTC

poor Meryl
cant wait to read more

hspirito March 5 2013, 04:54:13 UTC

the kids will be involved in the next chapter.
in the Moments story before Jack took Meryl from the cabin she had spent hours with the books focused on memory loss and after a dream she regained the majority of her memories but i will be bringing that aspect back in the coming chapters, Don and the kids will question her on it and a fuller more in depth explanation will be given soon.
sorry for any confusion

miley25 March 5 2013, 08:33:46 UTC

Oh and maybe have Meryl tell her family what she went through? Update soon!