Writing at Choroni II

[htown1397]

Don't comment with anything that you think this poem might be talking about, because it has nothing to do with whatever you're thinking. I just wrote this poem through the perspective of a fictitious person I made up. Just didn't want anyone to think that I was the 'speaker' of this poem.

Don’t Leave Me Hanging By a Thread

Carry me now,

Not with

Comments

[ophelia55]

hmm. poor speaker. love is hard.

[htown1397]

Love can also be damned awesome and beautiful. However, it does suck when one has to go through the "pain" that love brings. I just hope that the 'speaker' doesn't ressemble anyone on this planet because it would be hell for them. (I'm blabbering; don't mind me.)

[ophelia55]

i know.

love is AWESOME ahhhhh
i wanna see frannnn

[andresmirt]

stop writing poems about me u freak...

LMAO

[htown1397]

HAHAHAHAHHAHA! Dude, I fucking burst out laughing when I read what you wrote. But, alright, Mirt, I'll stop writing about you.. BUT NOOOO THERE WILL BE A HUGE EMPTY CAVITY IN MY HEART, THEN!!!

El Kumar

[mister_spooky]

I'm thankful for the night you came over to make sure I didn't jump out the window and I was able to convey to you exactly how much you meant to me. I'm thankful that you were there to mean that much to me.

thanks to you.

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