Feeling is falling

[hubschrauber]

Title: Feeling is falling.
Pairing: M2
Spoilers: through "Iris doesn't live here anymore"
Rating: PG for language maybe
Genre: Angst
Disclaimer: I own nothing. USA Network, Mary McCormack... Fred ::sigh:: are not making me any money.
Summary: Marshall's introspective. Mary's inebriated.
Author's Note: I have had major writer's block in my other fandoms

Comments

[randomrattle]

Omgod, I loved this; so vicereal, so cryptic with pain and want and comprehension of The Facts.

but sometimes selfishly, he needs the distance she uses as armor to save himself. That! That is so true for this man dealing with the typhoon of this woman.

he's still figuring out how she was named Mary with a mother called Jinx and a sister named Brandi. Stripper names. I never twigged to that thought before now--what a great observation!

He's the safety net, without having one of his own. No one's cushioning his fall when he bends under the tumult of her rage and indignation. Breaking with his own needs and wishes. No one's telling him to let go. And he should but he can't. Again with the great perception of Marshall and his circumstances.

Marshall knows he should let go. Lead her to the couch. Transfer to a different state. Fecking ADORE this landslide of his thinking...

I hope you're write more with these two....

[hubschrauber]

first of all... you found my LJ which is like.. ::huge grin on face::

secondly, thank you for your comments! I was just trying to write how Marshall must feel some of the time when dealing with Mary. Especially in light of the gunshot wound that magically made them okay when he was thinking of leaving the Marshalls. There has to be tension there, ignored tension, but tension. How can the writers just gloss over that?!

thirdly, writing more. definitely. :)

thank you for the feedback. I really appreciate it.