Comments | hucknclem: Criminal Minds Fic: Origins, Part 2/2

hucknclem

Criminal Minds Fic: Origins, Part 2/2

Oct 18, 2010 22:19

Characters: Aaron Hotchner, David Rossi, Jason Gideon, brief appearances by others
Rating: Possibly PG13 for language?
Warnings: Maybe for one smack?
Summary: Preseries. Aaron's transfer to the BAU is approved, circa 1993
Note: Can be considered pre-Inheritance verse, if you want.

Part 1

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Comments 8

ficwriterjet October 19 2010, 14:25:53 UTC

No fair! I find this new fic from you FIVE minutes before I have to get ready for work. :( Now I'll be antsy to get home so I can read it.

ficwriterjet October 20 2010, 02:35:02 UTC

It was so good! Wonderful job. I'll give you better feedback soon. :)

hucknclem October 20 2010, 02:48:53 UTC

You're so sweet; thanks, Jen! I kind of got my ass kicked, LOL, but it was worth it, if only because it's finished! *hugs* :)

Can't Say Enough anij_scealai October 21 2010, 16:24:31 UTC

This was positively incredibly start to finish. One of the things that I liked so much about this story involved the little details...facial expressions, the way people dressed, inflections...those things that really define the characters and help us to recognize them as the ones we love to watch. I just loved that Rossi had requested Hotch...I WAS fairly certain that they knew his name. The interaction with Rossi & Hotch at the police station was really well done. Just a fabulous piece! Wonderful job!

Re: Can't Say Enough hucknclem October 22 2010, 22:40:20 UTC

Thanks, Anika! I'm happy the characters were recognizable (whew!) to you. :) Hope your NCIS fic is going well - looking forward to reading it! :)

anij_scealai October 25 2010, 13:23:46 UTC

Well, it is going...I don't know that I would say well. I challenged myself to stick with cannon characters...I often in insert OCs. I have the idea, but I am struggling a bit with development. I am sure that it will come along in time! Thanks again for this CM fic - it was wonderful! Very good job with the case details too.

ficwriterjet November 8 2010, 02:25:48 UTC

I liked that it was Aaron's idea to look for the unsub by searching the sixteen mile radius that people usually commute to work, and I liked that it worked. When they get to his house, it builds the tension when they find the gloves, and it was creepy that they found the picture of his wife with her face scratched up ( ... )

hucknclem November 8 2010, 03:49:12 UTC

I'm so glad the case worked for you, because it was driving me *crazy* (as I'm sure you well remember from all the complaining I did when we talked!). I'm so happy you enjoyed it, and yes, I'll send it soon, maybe with my new one? I just posted another tonight, 'cause that's the way I roll. ;) Thanks for being such a wonderful friend! *hugs* :)

PS: I was yearning to smack Rossi throughout most of the fic, LOL. Thank god he's calmed down in canon! :)