Criminal Minds Fic: Wish

Jan 16, 2011 13:56

Characters:  Elle Greenaway/Jason Gideon, Spencer Reid, brief mention of others
Rating: Possibly M for language/content?
Warnings: SPOILERS up to Season 3, spanking & smut
Summary:  Giants-verse.  Elle's careful what she wishes for.
Note:  Written for ficwriterjet's twenty prompts, prompt "Fear", and thanks always to astrangerfate  for humoring my obsessions.  ;)

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criminal minds, spanking, wish, het, fic

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liselisa January 17 2011, 12:30:27 UTC
It's so great to see a fic from you again. I don't watch this show, so I don't really get the context, but the schmoop and the happy ending are just what the doctor ordered today. Thanks for the great story!

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hucknclem January 17 2011, 18:58:57 UTC
Awww, thanks, Lise! Yeah, schmoop and a happy ending are definitely on my needed list for the day, too. *hugs* Thanks for reading and hope you're doing well! :)

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liselisa January 18 2011, 02:29:30 UTC
Jet lag and a cold, but otherwise a positive outlook. Also found out that a SPN actor lives in my neighborhood. Saw him twice in one day after I got back this time.

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hucknclem January 18 2011, 07:32:51 UTC
Really? Is it Jim Beaver? Wow, just asking. He's always the one who seems most accessible to me. And a darn nice guy. :) I'm glad you're feeling positive even being sick - sending you good vibes! :)

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ficwriterjet January 18 2011, 06:58:48 UTC
Loved the story. Thanks very much for signing up for the prompt challenge. :) I'll do real feedback when it's not 11pm with the kids STILL awake and saying they can't sleep. *Sigh*

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hucknclem January 18 2011, 07:34:54 UTC
Thanks so very much for hosting the challenge, and for letting me participate, and for reading my fic even when the show isn't your thing. *hugs you* And yes, kids that can't sleep. I have those, too. Yet strangely, I could fall asleep in the middle of an air raid these days. Coincidence? I think not!! :)

PS: Call reschedule, this week! It's been too long! :)

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Exceptional! anonymous April 11 2011, 21:14:43 UTC
That was wonderfully done! You really do and excellent job with these characters, particularly Gideon! I really liked this line:

“No,” he replies simply, and smacks her again. This time Elle is ready for it, automatically choking back a gasp at the smarting blow. “It’s my solution for you. You’re behaving like a child.”

I like how she tries so hard to hold it together then lets go when she thinks he's gone...but he's not. I really liked this part too:

He shrugs. “I didn’t say it was only for you.”

Elle rolls her eyes. “Just do me a favor, and don’t make a habit of it.”

“Entirely up to you,” he agrees amicably.

I loved the part with Reid and how he wasn't surprised and then his little anthropological discussion. I really liked this line:

“You’re welcome. I think I’m getting better at it,” he adds, sounding pleased with himself. “Although I’m pretty sure offering to give the hostage taker a ride wasn’t part of our training.”

Overall just a terrific story!

Anika

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Re: Exceptional! hucknclem April 20 2011, 16:32:24 UTC
Aww, thanks, Anika! I'm so glad you're back; I'm still behind on replying to my personal emails, but I'm going to get to that soon! :) I'm happy you liked the fic - Elle and Gideon are kind of my new happy place, but they don't have much of a following, LOL. Hope you're doing well and TTYS; thanks for reading! :)

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kexapush April 12 2011, 22:35:06 UTC
Super-Duper site! I am loving it!! Will come back again – taking your RSS feeds also, Thanks.

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hucknclem April 20 2011, 16:33:55 UTC
I'm glad you like it! Although I don't know what RSS feeds are? But I'm still not super-adept at LJ, even after all this time... :) Thanks for coming by! :)

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hucknclem May 30 2011, 01:58:00 UTC
Hi, Kayleigh! I wish I *could* tell you where you could find more, but the reason I ended up writing these was because I couldn't find any to read, and I need a fix, LOL. I'm sure there are probably one or two on ff.net, but not that I've ever seen? Not many fans seem to like Elle or Gideon very much, so they don't tend to get as much coverage. :( If you find any, please let me know! :)

And yes, Gideon in a bathrobe - or out of it - one of my favorite thoughts. Uhhh, is it warm in here? *fans self* :)

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