Comments | hug______: [fic] it's only my world

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[fic] it's only my world

Oct 03, 2014 00:05

Title: it's only my world
Pairing: implied JaeMin, implied YunJae
Rating: PG
Length: one shot (1020 words)
Genre: angst

( The elegant fingers gently smoothing over his skin felt like heaven, though, and he couldn´t help relishing the affection once so rarely given, grudgingly melting into large hands and eyes fluttering half-closed. )

genre: angst, rating: pg, length: oneshot, author: s, focus: jaejoong

Comments 4

shinchul303 October 2 2014, 22:54:19 UTC

Very adult. Interesting to see them interacting as men and not boys.

rjaejoo October 3 2014, 01:00:48 UTC

Very good, leaves me wanting more.

tardiskeeper October 3 2014, 04:20:38 UTC

The battle of our inner demons in these self created cages rages, destroys, and we are left with deafening silence only to be broken by the cries of the soul.
Dark. Chagmin's presence almost felt unreal, like a self made illusion to sooth, but broken by words that conveyed a truth all too well known, yet nonetheless painful.

Thank you.

jasexists January 21 2015, 08:56:20 UTC

Really interesting....my heart breaks a little for Jaejoong T_T