Resolution

Jan 19, 2009 12:49

Here's the first chapter of something I've been wanting to write for so long. It isn't a long story!!
Chapter 1 )

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lovewithstands January 19 2009, 22:31:57 UTC
Love this first chapter Not looking forward to Jacks passing but I am looking forward to reading more I hope its more chapters then 4 though anyways I also like the fact that ennis HAD to get his hat back even-though it was in a dangerous area Waiting to read more :)

PS.Thanks for sharing

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hugsuzie January 20 2009, 10:35:21 UTC
Glad you liked. Don't worry too much about Jack's passing. I can't imagine Ennis will want to dwell on it any more than we do :(
More on its way!

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bentgyro January 20 2009, 05:44:39 UTC
This is well done - waiting for more!
Thank you!
HT

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hugsuzie January 20 2009, 10:36:15 UTC
My pleasure! More is most definitely on its way!
Sx

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onefreetoroam January 20 2009, 13:59:27 UTC
Hi, interesting start - liked it so far. Kinda scared me there for a minute with Ennis. (grin)

bob

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hugsuzie January 20 2009, 14:45:04 UTC
Not as much as he scared Jack!!! Thanks for reading.
Sx

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sapphobrazil January 20 2009, 16:06:10 UTC
liked it.. keep goin´

Ana

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hugsuzie January 21 2009, 09:32:42 UTC
Thank you! I will :)

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whrson_btch January 21 2009, 19:47:53 UTC
Great start!!

Like the setting!!

The beginning was sad...that image of Ennis is always difficult to deal with:(

Looking forward to more!!

Thanks

Terri

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hugsuzie January 21 2009, 20:06:30 UTC
Glad you like! I know what you mean about that image of Ennis being hard to deal with and that's partly why I'm writing this thing...

Thanks for commenting,

Sx

P.S. You OFFICIALLY have the coolest name on lj! I love it!! :)

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