Bechel Challenge - untitled work in progress, chapter 2

Feb 15, 2013 18:04

Title: who the f*** knows?! chapter 2.
Rating: G, but trending towards darker topics.
Characters: Berúthiel, OFC.
Word count: ~2500
Summary: Our intrepid young Umbarian lady and her strange cat friend continue their journey.

If nits are spotted, please to pick them.  This underwent less proofreading than I'm wont to do.

TOC: Chapter 1.

Chapter 2 )

berúthiel, writing - bechdel

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hhimring February 16 2013, 22:30:42 UTC
Trending towards darker topics indeed.
So Beruthiel is a descendant of Fuinur? You can see why she wouldn't want to marry the King of Gondor.

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huinare February 16 2013, 23:27:26 UTC
Yeah, I got it into my head to make her a descendant of someone who was at least mentioned as being influential among the Black Númenoreans. Because reasons.

Thanks for reading!

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wheelrider February 19 2013, 02:56:45 UTC
Finally got a chance to read this, and I like it a lot!

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huinare February 20 2013, 19:39:14 UTC
Thank you! =]

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