Yeah. I really like this. You did a good job capturing the voices of the characters, and the mystery was a nice background. And I liked the title you came up with. It fits.
This really is a great story. I think Archie's waffling & Saul's certainty are both very true to the characters. I found Archie's near-death scene very touching.
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I love your Archie too. He is actually, kind of a woobie, but a well dressed one. *g* The car scene was just awesome. Thank you for writing this.
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