Stargate SG1 Fanfic: D is for Daniel - Denial Is Not Just A River In Egypt

[hummingfly67]

Title: D is for Daniel - Denial Is Not Just A River In Egypt
Author: hummingfly67
Rating: PG-13/Teen
Summary: Vala seeks out the one person that keeps the quiet at bay
Disclaimer: Not mine. MGM has that honor

A/N: Written for sg_fignewton's Vala's Alphabet Soup. Thank-you to sg_fignewton for beta!

Comments

[amberflyant]

Well done, good use of the challenge! Clever play on words....

[hummingfly67]

Thank-you! Though it was a struggle for me to stay gen. : )

[eilidh17]

Oh, very clever. Very interesting to see the two 'interpretations' of Daniel she harbors. Lovely play on words at the end. :)

[hummingfly67]

Thanks! I really do think Daniel was that beacon in the dark for her.

And of course the denial wasn't just hers alone. : )

[campylobacter]

suppressing the urge to bat her eyelashes at him (it really irritates him, and never works anyway).

LOL! Yes. He responds better to tears. Canon!

The Daniel in her head begins a lecture on binary code extrapolation and she tunes him out

Because Sam's explanations make more sense!

Though personally she thinks her behind is a ten.

So do I. ;-D

If one were to switch two of the vowels in Daniel's name, one would end up with 'denial'.

Heck yeah, that anagram is one of the best tropes in Jack/Daniel slash stories.

Ya know, this fic feels like a first chapter in a really good PWP. ::hint hint::

Because:

The times when those thoughts get too loud, so loud she wonders how she doesn't go insane

That sentence needs some serious resolution, fer realz, grrl. I wanna read more of your Daniel/Vala!

[hummingfly67]

Thanks!

I'm hoping there's more Vala and/or Daniel/Vala in my writing future.

[hummingfly67]

: ) Thanks!

[samantilles]

I really enjoyed your Vala voice, especially her talking about 'sixes'. I think you managed to capture her very well in this fic! thanks for sharing!

[hummingfly67]

Thank-you very much for reading and commenting! Glad you enjoyed.