Stargate SG1 Fanfic: Fubar

Mar 04, 2010 18:24

Title: Fubar
Author: hummingfly67
Prompt: Sometimes I think to myself, this is it, this is going to be the day we have a nice, sane, boring mission ( Read more... )

fanfic, stargate sg1

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anonymous March 17 2010, 06:18:14 UTC
I really enjoyed the dialogue. It felt very authentic and true to the characters. Thanks for posting it!

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hummingfly67 March 17 2010, 11:56:01 UTC
I really enjoyed the dialogue.

Thank-you! I'm glad, I was pretty happy with it, it felt right.

Appreciate you taking the time to comment, made my morning to see this.

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mariewynn April 3 2010, 00:03:20 UTC
Loved it! Everyone was completely in character--it was almost like reading a transcript of the show! Perfect! Hoping for more!

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hummingfly67 April 3 2010, 13:26:49 UTC
(love your icon)

Thanks very much! Appreciate the comments.

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officersun524 April 3 2010, 22:42:17 UTC
Ah, hummingfly, I just loved that. Great, great dialog--dead on with the characterization. I just had the slightest little feeling that there might be more to Vala's pain and the sympathy it received than what Daniel was perceiving. I guess I know Vala too well too ( ... )

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hummingfly67 April 9 2010, 02:10:33 UTC
Thanks ever so much! Reading your feedback made my day (both times actually, lol...now that I have my comp back!)

Writing Vala is fun

Agreed!

I'm hoping the muse wants to go back and re-visit a "post-ep" of sorts.

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tafkarfanfic May 17 2010, 16:46:52 UTC
This was really fun and adorable. I loved getting to watch Vala be awesome! (And kudos for the way you handled her shoulder. A lot of people think once you've popped it back in, it's just FINE, and you didn't make that mistake.)

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hummingfly67 May 18 2010, 11:45:25 UTC
Thanks for reading & commenting! I loved the dynamics Vala brought to the team, including fun. I also think she was under-used on the show, we should have gotten another season or two with her.

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