A/N:Hi there. This is excruciatingly short, in my opinion. Roughly 1.6K words. Been wanting to write this in a while. Don't expect too much please, I think I accidentally raised expectations on my writing with Sixteen Hours To None. I'm sorry. Lol. To be honest, I think this has been done quite a lot but I hope I managed to make it make it non-
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hello again!!
well,thanks a lot for a new story! hihi
its simple though,yet makes me happy ahaha
i sneakily open soshified out of the blue, coz i have a lot of assignments! and ta-da! its you!
nothing better than having someone that is always special in our life rite? well, i wish i have that person..
hmpff..
well, hope to see you again!
.daash.
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Nothing beats having someone special. Special in a way or another. It could be a sister, a best friend, a lover; but I'm sure there's a special someone for everyone. ^^
See you~!
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I Love It !
Yes, it's cheesy as can be, but sometimes that's the only way to bring out the special love shared between our 2 special Soshi ladies ;).
Reading this has got me thinking that sometimes, perhaps Tiffany does really feel sad inside, even though she still displays that infectious megawatt eye-smiles of hers.
Food for thought, huh ?
Good job on crafting this, my friend, Well Done !
Until your next one then, cheers !
Kenneth.
(P.S. Some typos I found that you may (or may not) want to edit:
1) Some nights, she would feel good but it was nights like these that she wished would just disappear. - “she wished she would just disappear”?
2) Tonight, she lied in bed at 8pm - “she lay in bed”?
3) because if they did, they had never let it showed - “let it show”?
4) give her a side-hug as they walk - “walked”?)
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Thanks. ^^
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