All Yours

Oct 11, 2012 23:12

A/N:Hi there. This is excruciatingly short, in my opinion. Roughly 1.6K words. Been wanting to write this in a while. Don't expect too much please, I think I accidentally raised expectations on my writing with Sixteen Hours To None. I'm sorry. Lol. To be honest, I think this has been done quite a lot but I hope I managed to make it make it non- ( Read more... )

taeny, taeyeon, one-shot, fanfiction, tiffany, snsd

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anonymous October 11 2012, 18:28:05 UTC
haai hai hai!
hello again!!

well,thanks a lot for a new story! hihi
its simple though,yet makes me happy ahaha
i sneakily open soshified out of the blue, coz i have a lot of assignments! and ta-da! its you!

nothing better than having someone that is always special in our life rite? well, i wish i have that person..
hmpff..
well, hope to see you again!

.daash.

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humyourheart October 14 2012, 06:56:21 UTC
Hello! You're welcome. Hoho, you were caught procrastinating. We can be friends. xD

Nothing beats having someone special. Special in a way or another. It could be a sister, a best friend, a lover; but I'm sure there's a special someone for everyone. ^^

See you~!

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Niiiice. XD sammyong23 October 11 2012, 18:39:58 UTC
Like I said, you're getting better. This might be a short piece, but it shows how much you've improved over the months. I'm so proud of you, young padawan. xD

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Re: Niiiice. XD humyourheart October 14 2012, 06:56:45 UTC
/bows/ Thank you, my loyal beta-reader. :D

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That is So Beautiful Indeed ! yeo_64 October 11 2012, 20:22:31 UTC
My dear friend, kudos on this beautiful Taeny one-shot :)!
I Love It !
Yes, it's cheesy as can be, but sometimes that's the only way to bring out the special love shared between our 2 special Soshi ladies ;).
Reading this has got me thinking that sometimes, perhaps Tiffany does really feel sad inside, even though she still displays that infectious megawatt eye-smiles of hers.
Food for thought, huh ?
Good job on crafting this, my friend, Well Done !
Until your next one then, cheers !
Kenneth.

(P.S. Some typos I found that you may (or may not) want to edit:
1) Some nights, she would feel good but it was nights like these that she wished would just disappear. - “she wished she would just disappear”?
2) Tonight, she lied in bed at 8pm - “she lay in bed”?
3) because if they did, they had never let it showed - “let it show”?
4) give her a side-hug as they walk - “walked”?)

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Re: That is So Beautiful Indeed ! humyourheart October 14 2012, 06:59:06 UTC
Food for thought indeed. In AAGG, Sunny mentioned something in her self-talk, about Tiffany's eyes hiding so much and then there were also Taeny's self talk about each other and how they're bad with expressing their feelings to each other... so I've been wanting to write something about it for so long. Finally got around to doing so. ^^

Thanks. ^^

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sparksfly7 October 11 2012, 21:29:21 UTC
aww this is so adorable :)

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humyourheart October 14 2012, 06:59:19 UTC
:D

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shipper_eonni October 11 2012, 21:59:02 UTC
New reader her. I liked it a lot - just the perfect read before going to bed! Thank you dor sharing

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humyourheart October 14 2012, 07:00:06 UTC
Thanks. ^^ Reading before bed is love.

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