All Yours

[humyourheart]

A/N:Hi there. This is excruciatingly short, in my opinion. Roughly 1.6K words. Been wanting to write this in a while. Don't expect too much please, I think I accidentally raised expectations on my writing with Sixteen Hours To None. I'm sorry. Lol. To be honest, I think this has been done quite a lot but I hope I managed to make it make it non-

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[darkpluto1]

i can picture this story based on their real-life ^^

i love your writing style.

[humyourheart]

Me too; picture them that way, I mean. LOL. Thank you. xD

[donkatsu]

AAAA So sweetttt ^^ I like how you describe everything here. The thoughts, the emotions... bravo! ^^

It's rare to find well written fics these days. I'm glad you're writing ^^
Just a little tip for next time (which I learned from my own mistakes):
the past tense of "lie" as in lying in bed etc is "lay" not "lied" :) The past tense of "lay" as in lay her head down is "laid" ^^

AAAA IMMA REREAD <3 THANK YOU <3

[humyourheart]

Hehe. Thank you, I'm flattered to have you say that. :D

OMG. THANKS. I googled about that the other day and still couldn't figure it out. Noted.

/grins/ Reread to your heart's content, by all means. ^^

[implim]

Lol its such a coincidence that you wrote something about Tiffany's smile, I wrote something similar some time ago, not similar similar, but it revolves around her famous smile XDD

Its nice and sweet, I really like how Taeyeon never asked her about her tears just accepting what is and perhaps secretly waiting for Tiffany to open up with regards to what has been troubling her, herself.

Thanks for sharing this :)

[humyourheart]

Every soshi-fanfic writer should always write about Tiffany's smile, at least once. It's a to-do thing. For real. Something that breath-takingly gorgeous needs every writer of every genre write about it their own way. xD

You're right about Taeyeon. Sometimes it's better to wait for the person to open up themselves and talk about it at their own time rather than probe/ask them about it. ^^

Thank you, for reading. ^^

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[anonymous]

AGREE EVERYONE!!!
this is super cute, cheesy, fluffy combined that it made me <3 flutter as i read this!!

i just simply love this!!

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[humyourheart]

Hi! Glad you liked this. ^^

[oceanus88]

Hey there!
What a beautiful shot you have here. :)
I have been away from fanfics lately and was glad to stumble upon yours just when I looked for fanfics to read. It's a good one!

Thanks for such a good read! :)

[humyourheart]

Oh! YOU! I read your stories too. MVP and NSG. I'm still waiting for an ending for NSG, by the way. :P

Anyway, thank you, for reading and commenting. ^^