제발 (Please)

[humyourheart]

A/N: HAPPY 27th OF THE MONTH, LOCKSMITHS! ^^

So, I'm so sorry if I suck at this type of writing or failed to deliver this well but I was listening a lot to Tulisa's Sight Of You and it was messing up my feelings that I just really had to get it out. Lol.

The Music Video reminds me so much of theninthtrack's One Had A Heart. Seriously messed up

Comments

[superman2601]

Hie~ dis oneshot is short~ but its nice~ held my breath awhile dere wen Tiffany said "I'm sorry"~tot she be walking away~ but phew~~ i guess being in a 1st r/s there are always things mite noe and nt noe wat to do~ hope the 2nd chance will make dem better~ :D Thanks for the update~ c",)

[humyourheart]

Yeah, there's always things one won't understand or know what to do when it's their first relationship. But it's all about patience and working it out. I think this 2nd chance would definitely make them better together. ^^

[eevanlvis]

I thought Tiffany was gonna leave or something- I would've died you know?! Don't do that again. Or maybe do it. Coz this one-shot is good. Like really good :)

[humyourheart]

Hey! It's you. ;___; I just finished reading your shape-shifting story, rofl, that was wild! :D And thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :)

Awwww...,That is so Sad and Sweet at the same time ;).

[yeo_64]

My dear friend, what an Awesome one-shot that you've written here ;). I Love It !
Please don't think any less of your writing just because it is "short" by your standards, as it is the overall content that counts in a story, and yours has captured the emotions that you wanted to portray most adequately :D.
Personally, I feel that you've managed to capture the sense of loss felt by Taeyeon, and, subsequently, the sense of relief felt by her when she finally got Tiffany back, in these few words of yours.
Kudos, my dear friend, kudos :).
Until your next update then, Cheers !
Kenneth.

(P.S. A couple of typos I spotted that you may want to fix (or not):
1) the heart that had been forcefully been given back to her - “the heart that had been forcefully given back to her” or “ the heart that had forcefully been given back to her”?
2) having her walk away without taking a second look to her - “a second look at her”?)

Re: Awwww...,That is so Sad and Sweet at the same time ;).

[humyourheart]

Aw, thanks. I like your comments. I like all who comments but it's always good to have full feedback. ^^

[anonymous]

Both of them suffered so much from the break up. I'm so glad they love each other enough to forgive each other for their shortcomings. I bet they will be even sweeter to each other after they kiss and make up.= tipco

[humyourheart]

KISS AND MAKE UP! xD Yeah. For a relationship to work, you've got to work it out together and do your best, yes? ^^

[littlemisz]

Listen to this song (Taeyeon-Please(Chinchin Radio)) //www.youtube.com/watch?v=DcABYMURi8A
while reading this oneshot make me T_T

[humyourheart]

T____T Why. You broke my heart.