A/N: Wrote this last monday, randomly (again), when I was on sick leave. Go figure. :)
BUT NOW I AM A FREE BIRD. So I'll share some lovin'. :>
P.S; Let me use that one wild card some writers tend to use. That one story that's named Untitled, because we can't find an appropriate title..... (and/or too lazy to :D )
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but thankfully theyre back together. for some odd reason their breakup kind of hits me. idk, its not like i experienced that before... but.. idk..
this is nice THANK YOU for making a happy ending. i do not want to cry in the middle of the night XD lmao. goodnight as well :)
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Somehow I find this storyline somewhat more "realistic" than the usual fanfic tale as it deals with a topic most authors tend to avoid: the reality that you can "over love" someone until it literally "kills" the relationship ;).
I just Love how you managed to describe the "post-fight" scene so vividly such that I could actually visualize the "mess" in the room. Kudos to for the subsequent "leaving" scene and, my favourite, the "second chance meeting and reconciliation" scene at the end of the story. My heart literally melted after reading those paragraphs :D. Bravo!
Once again, thank you very much, my dear friend, take care and I will look forward to your next post here :).
Cheers!
Kenneth.
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Beautiful piece by you, as always :) thank you for this.
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