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Feb 17, 2012 15:19

“Did you know”, Shou said, warm eyes huge and sparkling,“that elephants can die from loneliness?”

They were sitting in a cute little cafe on a cold morning somewhen in january. Thick layers of snow covered the sidewalks, the streets were icy and slippery and cold wind hauled against the windows.

Snorting, Tora placed a hand on Shou’s and looked up to ( Read more... )

band: alice nine, fanfiction

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eimininja February 17 2012, 18:33:51 UTC
Aww this was beautiful, so sad yet so sweet and happy. It was perfect! And thank you for writing my OTP there isn't enough ToraShou in the world!

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hungryxheart February 18 2012, 14:22:39 UTC
I'm glad you like it!
ToraShou is my OTP as well, I can't get enough of them lol.

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nchee February 18 2012, 00:57:47 UTC
lovely :) i enjoyed reading it, you write beautifully. i hope u continue this. I'm really excited to read more about their relationship. I LOLed when shou laughed at tora's name! It was understandable...I mean, when u ask someone what's their name, and they say "I'm Tiger"...bwahehehehhehe

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hungryxheart February 18 2012, 14:24:35 UTC
Thank you <3 I will definitely continue this, I already have the first few chapters written!

I think everyone would laugh if you intoduced yourself as "Tora" lol. It's okay for a stage name but otherwise...

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shou_ni February 18 2012, 11:08:00 UTC
This was really beautiful. I can't wait to read more, you've got me wondering alot.

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hungryxheart February 18 2012, 14:25:48 UTC
Thank you <3
I think I'll be able to update fast as I've already written a few chapters~

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swoon21 February 18 2012, 15:15:12 UTC
I really like it so far)
I love how you painted Shou, so lovable and it's really easy to picture him that way. And I really like your style in general. Looking forward to more)

Also just curious: is English your second language? It's really good, just sounds a bit different.

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hungryxheart February 18 2012, 15:34:53 UTC
Thank you so much!
And yes, English is my second language^^
If you find any mistakes feel free to point them out!

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swoon21 February 18 2012, 15:44:40 UTC
There aren't any serious mistakes, but there are some misspelt words so I think it would be good if you used Microsoft Word or something else to fix these small mistakes.

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