OP Fic: Nothing to Choose (Part 4)

[hunterwithcause]

Title: Nothing to Choose - Part 4
Author: hunterwithcause
Fandom: One Piece
Pairing/Characters: Strawhat Pirates
Genre/Category: What If?
Rated: PG-13
Word count: 595
Warnings: Character death
Spoilers/Setting: Set at an unspecific time after Thriller Bark
Disclaimer:One Piece does not belong to me.

Summary: A sum is made up of many parts. Take one part away and

Comments

[red_savant]

Augh, no, Strawhats!

So depressing, but I enjoyed the glimpse into Robin's mind. It's hard to remember sometimes that she's so much older than Nami, the way they get along.

Just one thing I noticed. It should be 'a flash of lightning' in that paragraph, not 'lightening'.

Please keep it up! I'm severely dreading the Luffy chapter, and yet I want to read it so badly...

[hunterwithcause]

Robin's a pretty hard character to write; not only is she older than the Strawhats, but her past is so much bleaker. She's used to betrayal and death, but not friendship and loyalty. I have a new found respect for all those Robin-writer's out there!

Argh! The dreaded 'e'! And at the beginning I triple-checked to make sure I didn't use the wrong word! :(
Thank you very much for pointing that out! Such an annoying mistake... >.>

Ah, the Luffy chapter... It's probably one of the chapters I dread most myself >.<"

Thank you very much for commenting! <3

[schokoccino]

Very well, like always xD
Amazing what you can do when you skipped school the next day.
And by the way: Why have I actually asked myself yesterday what you've written during the movie in English? *mutter*

I really take my imaginary hat off to your description of robins thoughts. You did very well managing it. I often forget that Robin is so much older than the others. This makes her more difficult to write. But since you are indeed getting old, too (:P) probably you do can empathize very well, don't you? xD
No, seriously: It is really sad. I was on the edge of my seat, even though I knew how it would turn out (particularly with regard to the last chapters - and my spoiled knowledge of your plan xD). I was just a little bit confused between the chopper-falls-overboard-part and Robins near-knockout. But again that's probably just a lack of skill of reading the English language (and tiredness, listlessness and the knowledge that I still have to learn / read through the stupid presentation).
Anyway: I'm looking forward to the next one!

[hunterwithcause]

I didn't write this during the English movie xD That was the beginning of a Yu-Gi-Oh! fluffy Kaiba-brothers piece. I didn't get anywhere with it though; the movie was actually interesting xD Strange, I don't remember the movie being this interesting when we watched it in Techno last year... o.ô

I'm getting old? Are you really sure you wanna call me old? Remember which one of us is the granny; if I'm Robin (age-wise) that makes you Franky!

Y'know, I think you can scratch the plans I had for the other parts that I've told you about when I started writing this. While Franky's part, for example, will be similar to what I originally planned it won't be quite so... depressing.

Well, if I got your attention it can't be that bad. Especially since you're used to such superb plots like a bunny welcoming people to Narnia while ordering them to throw a ring into a volcano to stop the evil Lord Voldemort... *cough* xD

What caused the confusion? Maybe I can help :P

Oh, just admit it! You want my English grades to suffer, don't you? xD

Ah,

[schokoccino]

Okay, then it was a legitimate question xD I don't know... maybe because it's english and you're a discriminator of german language? xD Or we are wiser know *cough*

Shush! I'm young-at-heart :P I'm getting plump and taut and you will be wrinkled and haggard!

Well, I thought that would come, because you weren't so sure about Robin, Franky and Brook ^^ But the final plan is like it was, isn't it? It would be really really sad if you plan to change the termination... But I also think that if you are going to change it the new idea will be also great (in any case I hope so xD)... Will you change it? (Yes or No is enough... I don't want to spoiler or something. That isn't fun)

Oh, oh, is Miss self-appointed greenhorn trying to use some sarcasm there? xD As if I would hear something like that all the time! *cough* And anyway: Are you jealous of my little brother with his dorky crackbrained childish and strange fancifulness? Would you like to have such awesome ideas, which no one else would be so stupid to tell anyone ever had? ;P

[hunterwithcause]

Me? Can't be, you're the discriminator! xD

Oh, wait, I get it, it's like, you're using irony? Say one thing but mean the complete opposite? Then yes, I agree, you're very young. Very young.

The last two parts will be the same, and the rest will be more or less the same. The only one really affected is the Franky part which will be less depressing than what I had originally planned (I think xD).

Of course I'm jealous of your brother! But then, I don't have to bother, seeing as you promised me his hand in marriage. Now I can cherry-pick his most insane ideas and make them my own! *OMG so evil laugh*

No, c'mon, tell me! I'm feeling bad now! :( And it's entirely your fault! 4rlz!

To tell the truth, it's not J. I've got a problem with... *glares further to the right* YOU WILL NEVER WIN!!!! xD

Striking things out is fun! But you're still weird! xD