OP Fic: Nothing to Choose (Part 8)

Feb 21, 2010 20:01

Title: Nothing to Choose - Part Eight
Author: hunterwithcause
Fandom: One Piece
Pairing/Characters: Nami, Sanji
Genre/Category: What if?, pre-het
Rated: PG-13
Word count: 465
Warnings: Off-screen character death
Spoilers/Setting: Set after Thriller Bark
Disclaimer: One Piece does not belong to me.

Summary: A sum is made up of many parts. Take one part away and ( Read more... )

fic: one piece, fic series: nothing to choose

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samej February 21 2010, 19:18:23 UTC
Oh, Usopp. The funny, liar Usopp ;_; I love the oppresive atmosphere, the way you treat it and the fact that you used Nami for this.

She knew loss, she knew the pain of losing a beloved person. She would deal, and she would become stronger for it.

Awesome line ♥

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hunterwithcause February 21 2010, 19:30:18 UTC
Wow, you sure are quick! :D

Heh, this was actually the first part I wrote for this fic, back when it wasn't a multi-parter but just an answer to a prompt a dear friend gave me. Well, a different version of this, and I didn't complete it back then, but yeah, the idea of Nami grieving for Usopp was what set this whole fic in motion :)

Thank you! :D

Seeing as Nami already lost Bellemere I figured that she knew that life went one after the death of a beloved one. Nami is a very strong character, after all ♥

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samej February 21 2010, 19:33:09 UTC
jajajaj I stalk you have this tracked! :D

YES! That was a great idea, the Nami arc was so sad and pretty, I love how you reflected it here.

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hunterwithcause February 21 2010, 20:23:19 UTC
Yay for stalking tracking! xD

The Arlong Park Arc is one of my favourites <3 Thank you!

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red_savant February 28 2010, 01:16:38 UTC
Oh noes, I've been away from OP and I missed this! As always, very well-written and very depressing. -.-

Do I detect a hint of UsoNa shipping here...? Probably not. =)

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hunterwithcause February 28 2010, 11:11:21 UTC
Thank you! :D

The depressing parts are nearly over, thank God :)

Actually, it's more of a SaNa hint... *closeted SaNa shipper*

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schneefink February 24 2011, 11:52:59 UTC
Very good series. Especially the deaths of Nami and Chopper and the one where Franky didn´t come with them. Not that it was good to read, just very well done and moving. Um. Does that make sense?

It´s weird, but I hope there won´t be a "it was a magic potion and they all experienced their nightmares" ending, because I think I like the snippets better as what-could-(have-)happen(ed) standalones.

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hunterwithcause February 24 2011, 13:55:39 UTC
Thank you! Seeing as it's exactly what I'm hoping to accomplish, yes, it makes perfect sense :)

And the deaths of Nami, Chopper and Franky I my favourite parts as well ^^ Well, to be fair I like all parts (or I wouldn't have posted them ;)), but I think some of my best lines are in these three parts, so <3

Well, with the way this is going the tenth part may never be posted at all, so... I can say that it's not a magic potion, though :P

Thanks for commenting!

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