Baby, Think it Over - Chapter One (part two)

[hurricanecosmo]

Title: BABY, THINK IT OVER   (Chapter One, part two)
Disclaimer:  I do not own Viewfinder or any of it's awesome characters - Yamane-sensei does
Warnings: Language, Sex Talk
Characters: Akihito x Asami, OC
Rating:  18

“Settle down!  Settle down!  We have a lot to get through before you get out of here today!”  She was a small woman.  She wore her hair

Comments

[bru160]

Awesome Kissing Scene! *-*

A great start, with background, introduction of characters, very well done!

I can't wait to read the next chapter! :D

[hurricanecosmo]

Thank you! You are sweet! I am so glad you like it so far. The next chapter will be up later this week.

[bellieswtpea]

Thank you for writing this hilarious story. I can't wait to see what Asami has planned for Aki-chan, I nearly fell out of my seat when I read how Asami walked up to Aki nearly devoured him in front of the class.
I squealed so hard, I hurt my own ears, and I wonder what that creepy thought about Asami taking his prize before he could get this clammy hands on him. I so glad Asami did get Aki just to protect him fromm that goady rich kid which I know he would just abuse, use, and toss what ever is left out once he was done. I his sister did to Aki's brother. Yay, Asami, sorry Aki but you were meant for Asami. Tehehe!!

[hurricanecosmo]

Absolutely! LOL! Thank you so much! I am so glad you like it so far but we are not done with the "creepy"! Next chapter will be up later this week. :)

[crimson_elf90]

Fan-bloody-tastic! Where on earth did you learn to write like that! Incrediable, simply brilliant! I get a hint of cycincism but its exquistly funny and.. just.. perfect! the monolog and everything is amazing, how many times did you read and re-write this :P Cant wait to see where this is going to end up! I'm sure Asami will protect akihtio from rabid fan girls :P

[hurricanecosmo]

Wow! Thank you. You are right though. I read, re read and re re read. This story is actually finished because I make far too many mistakes and have to go back again and again to change things, LOL! I am so glad you like it. Thank you for reading and for this awesome comment. It makes the hard work so worth it. The next chapter will be up later this week. Thank you!

[radcat38]

This is a fun and novel and very creative story. Already in love with it and enjoying. Nice touch having Aki already with Asami crush and thoroughly enjoying the kiss. Good seeing Aki kind of already questioning what he likes and desires. Fun seeing Asami aleady wanting Aki and going after him with no regrets and no cares for the world. Kou and Takato blondies and in a relationship was another good touch. Poor Mich..hope things work out for him...Will Souh and Kei make an appearance?? And we already have a bad feeling about Kanabi (spelling)..Cannot wait for more...lol..thanks for the beginnings of a fun ride!!

[hurricanecosmo]

Thank you Cat! This is actually a request from 5123 back in July. Finally finished it. I am so glad you like it so far. It was fun to do so I hope you continue to like it! Next chapter will be up later this week. :)

[sekainosa28]

I'm glad to see your writing again.
It's really interesting for 1st chapter.
I'm curious when you said this class, is that mean, their old were same?
Was it set in college or high school setting?^^

I can't wait to see more.

[hurricanecosmo]

Yeah, in this one they ended up having to be the same age. They are seniors in High school. This is actually a request from 5123 from almost a year ago. I finally finished it. I am glad you like my writing and so glad to see you reading this one too. Next chapter will be up later this week.