Baby, Think it Over - Chapter Six

May 01, 2012 06:44

“The baby…”  Aki was sitting up and more awake just because of the doll’s cry then he was with Asami’s administrations and that really pissed Asami off.

“Let it wail!”  Yes, it would record that they left it to ‘cry’ but he had had enough of this stupid project!  He descended on Aki’s staff once more which unfortunately had lost a lot of its ( Read more... )

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spirit_jae May 1 2012, 21:44:15 UTC
the bodygaurds as babysitters?

Eriko deserved what she got, and now if only her brother would leave Akihito alone, maybe Asami will step in once more?

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hurricanecosmo May 3 2012, 01:51:34 UTC
Oh yes, Eriko is definitely a bitch! LOL! But we are not done with Brother! Next chapter is up on Friday!

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bellieswtpea May 1 2012, 22:02:58 UTC
OH! Ho! Asami, get those gears working and plan some action ti get Akihito all to yourself before the oppotunities is lost and parents come home and before Mr. Creepy puts his plan into action.
Kyyaaa! I can't wait. Great job, I loved the way Asami was trying to convince Aki that he needed him and not the fake baby. That Aki should pay attention to him. LOL! poor Asami, cheering for you.

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hurricanecosmo May 3 2012, 01:57:19 UTC
'Mr. Creepy'! Too funny! I love it!
I am so glad you like it! And we always know it has to be Asami and Aki! But our Asami will have to fight a little longer yet to 'claim the prize'! Next chapter is up on Friday.

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bellieswtpea May 3 2012, 19:58:38 UTC
Yeah Mr. Creepy, since I hated the way his POV on how he's watched, fantaizied about, and made several advances towards Akihito. Well *shrug*, but when Asami POV reveals his observations, feelings not towards akihito but about himself, and then the actions he set into motion. There's just no comparsion Asami "you go and divide aki's legs and conquer his tight little hole" LOL!!!! Thanks for the update, can't wait for Friday.

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radcat38 May 1 2012, 23:10:22 UTC
I just knew leaving work today that you had updated!! Yeah. Happy. So much fun listening to Asami loose his mind over his Aki and that doll and how he let Aki see that. An out of control Asami is pure wonder....
Cool flashbacks..thought he might have had a hand. Interesting that he only noticed Aki when he was indignant and out to save his brother. Then Asami was affected by how Aki felt and then started needing him. Nice.
Funny how he cannot get his way and easily get his boy...lol..an Asami not getting their way...will wonders never cease...
Enjoying the c...blocking. Probably good that some things are not coming quickly and easily to these two. Must be killing Asami not to go all the way...am I evil thinking that is entertaining and funny??
Watching Asami become the man he will be is kind of cool. Watching Aki grow into the wonderful caring justice seeking photag is great. Especially since they will going to the same school...wonder when Aki will get that statement.
Thanks for the cool chapter. c

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hurricanecosmo May 3 2012, 02:00:21 UTC
Yeah Cat! You are so smart. Can't get anything past you! I knew you would get it too! Love it! Thank you! I am so glad you like the progress. Was so hoping you would. Next chapter is up on Friday.

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phonoi May 2 2012, 01:23:52 UTC
Hahaha, it is so like Asami to remove anything in his way of getting to Akihito...including Akihito's own brother. I love that Asami had already fixed it so that Akihito could get into the college he wants even if he failed the class. I really like how you wrote Asami's POV here, how it was because of Akihito that drove him to want more power. It really sets a tone for how much Akihito means to Asami.

Looking forward to the next chapter, can't wait to see what Asami has planned!!!

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hurricanecosmo May 3 2012, 02:01:17 UTC
Thank you, Phonoi. Again, coming from you it is a true compliment. Thank you. Next chapter is up on Friday!

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ickyickypoopoo May 2 2012, 05:21:54 UTC
Oohhh watch out, Asami's out to get the "baby" now because of all the interruptions that have been preventing him from getting it on hot and heavy with Akihito.

I'm not gonna call you a tease again because you already know you are :p. I can't wait for the next chapter ;)

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hurricanecosmo May 3 2012, 02:02:17 UTC
LOL! Yep! We will see though if he "succeeds"! LOL! You are too cute! Thank you! Next chapter is up on Friday.

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