Challenge #4, October 2009, Part 4

[celadon_55]

Title: Things that Go Bump in the Night
Author: Celadon
What: Magic Where: Graveyard
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, Horror
Rating: PG-13
Characters:Don, Colby
Minor appearances by: Robin, Alan, David, Nikki, Charlie, Amita

Summary: Sometimes the safest thing to do on Halloween is stay home and pass out candy. Happy Halloween.

Comments

[lilacs_roses]

Agree with Rinkle! Well done and... just right for Halloween :)

[aleo_70]

A good ending, the conversation felt natural, even the steadfast agreement amongst everyone that Grabowski fell.

I see I was right on the girl. Nice that there was a direct tie in to Grabowski and that due to her help she make get justice for herself. The coincidence with the grave was spooky.

I liked Don asking for the light to be left on.

[munchkinofdoom]

Awww... love the last line!

I suspected the little red-haired girl (sorry, couldn't resist *veg*) was a ghost. I was a little worried that it was her clothing that Don grabbed in the open grave, but I love the thought that she might have saved Don from her own grave.

[saphirablue]

Wonderful last chapter! :)

Thank you! :)

[v_e_vancollie]

Nice! I liked what you did with the girl and how you worked the prompts in. Thank you for responding and sharing!