Concrit

[hurtandscared]

 Hey, how's my driving?

Just be honest and open about how I'm playing Alessa. Do you like my way of playing her? Hate it? Go ahead and say so!

Comments

[guillotine_beat]

I don't know anything about the canon, so I can't really give any crit. However, this icon is of a character from another series, Ai Enma from Hell Girl.

[hurtandscared]

Huh, that's weird. The girl who had it on her site had an ode to Alessa attached, but I guess she just took a picture she thought looked like Alessa. I'll go remove that. Thanks for the heads up! :3

(Also, that icon of yours is adorable.)

[guillotine_beat]

No problem!

(XD a friend made it for me)

[godsmommy]

So, a fellow Heather mun and I were chatting on AIM about how awesome your Alessa is and how well you play her ^^ I just wanted to let you know that a pretty vast amount of people think you're amazing at it.

I just love how you manage to capture so much innocence AND such adult things like rage and hate in her.

[hurtandscared]

(Oh God that icon XD )

Awww, thanks, seriously. ^.^ You don't know how much that means. It's hard to tell when I'm doing well or not, so it's always nice to hear when people enjoy it. <3

I'm really glad to play with you, seriously. I love your Heather. <3333

[godsmommy]

(XD right? Aki said I needed some smiling Heather icons and she ALWAYS LOOKS DERPY WHEN SHE SMILES, did you notice that?)

No problem! You should totally feel confident in your Alessa, because she's the best I've seen <3 she's very three-dimensional and you capture a lot of sides to her personality in every post. I love it.

8D I'm glad to play with you too! Our CR is just totally amazing. And ha ha, thanks <3 she's hella fun to play because she's such a brat.

[hurtandscared]

Thanks, bb. :3 I'm really happy you like her.

I love our CR! <3 Bratty demon god mothers, UNITE!

[anonymous]

Your Alessa is the best one I have ever seen being played in a rp community. You gave her so much depth and complexity, it's not even funny.
I see Alessa's character in a different light now, and love her even more than before, all because of you.

Keep up the awesomeness.

[hurtandscared]

Oh jeeze, thank you. ^///^ I'm so glad you like her, really! She's way fun to play, so I always love to hear that she's fun to read, too.

[anonymous]

Hi. I'm a big fan of your Alessa. I love her characterisation. But I think you could improve more in the use of her powers

[hurtandscared]

First of all, thanks for the compliment and thanks for taking the time to write this.

I really like those ideas! To be honest, I'd love to do those tailored Stein-type things more often (and I like the scary daydream and gaslighting idea--I'll use that in the future), but the issue that's come up recently is a lack of convenient people to do it with and general lack of inspiration on my end. Alessa's been a little hard to push into real honest-to-God action lately since she wants to please Sasha so much (and I'll admit that I've slacked off a fair bit recently), but I do agree that it's about time she actually started with the psychological fuckery again. I'll make a post on the next CR meme and keep an eye out for experiments/situations that would push her.

If you have any more tips for how to do that, I'm all ears, but otherwise, thanks!

[anonymous]

It seems my last message didn't appear here, so I will say it again(and hope you receive it this time).

I'm not asking you to start "with the psychological fuckery again". Play her the way you think is better. If it's hard to push her into "honest-to-God action" because of her need to please Sasha, so be it.

I'm just asking you to be more creative with her powers when/if she feels the need to use them.

[hurtandscared]

Ah, thank you, thank you, LJ's been messing with Alessa's account like hell. :/ I guess that's why we're going to DW.

Either way, it'd still be fun to mess with. Thanks for the advice; I intend to take it next time she starts getting rowdy again. <3