Title: Forever('Cause You're Gone) (3/4)

[hurtstoloveyou]

Title: Forever('Cause You're Gone) (3/4)
Rating: PG16 to be safe
Pairing: Pete/Patrick 
Summary: Fucked
Disclaimer:this is real like my rep for being cool at school
Author Notes: Thanks for liking this! I'm writing it really fast. My mind's on fire :P

3.Fucked
It was one of those sleepy, hazy, fuck-around summer days that Pete loved, when the sun hit just

Comments

[skelly_lector]

Ahaha, yes. I like it. The water fight was awesome, I can totally see it.

And I keep meaning to mention this, but I love the way you're organizing this, with every chapter being the next step in their relationship. I'm just sort of worried about what the title of the next one is going to be...But I still can't wait to read. >

[tailzz0666]

mmm wet Patrick is a sexy image lol
awesome chapter
your icon is hypnotic by the way

[hurtstoloveyou]

i know, it is a sexy image...*pant pant*
thank you!

[xlindziex]

Wow I haven't commented any fics in a long time on lj. Lol, anyways I love this! And just so you know I was listening to FOB Mr. Brightside cover and right as Pete was putting his hand on Patricks chest, the verse "Shes touching his chest now, he takes off her dress now" was playing. Too perfect lol, except neither of them were in a dress... too bad lol XD

[hurtstoloveyou]

ooh thanks :) yeah it's weird i only like that song when patrick sings it,